[Internal-cg] Review of combined proposal v6-clean

[Paul Wilson]

I’ve added a “-pw” version of Jari’s file, with a few further comments (and format fixes), mostly on the Exec Summary.

Paul.


On 29 Jul 2015, at 9:46, Jari Arkko wrote:

> I have reviewed the text. I am OK with the coming from the ICG, but I
> made a couple of suggested editorial improvements and a few comments,
> primarily for clarity.
>
> I have copied a revised document to Dropbox in the Combined Proposal folder.
> The file name is:
>
> combined-proposal-v6-clean-2015-07-28-comments-by-jariarkko.doc
>
> Jari
>
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Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC                        dg at apnic.net
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