[Internal-cg] Review of combined proposal v6-clean

[Jari Arkko]

I have reviewed the text. I am OK with the coming from the ICG, but I
made a couple of suggested editorial improvements and a few comments,
primarily for clarity.

I have copied a revised document to Dropbox in the Combined Proposal folder.
The file name is:

   combined-proposal-v6-clean-2015-07-28-comments-by-jariarkko.doc

Jari

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