[Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Alissa
Tks for edits and revision.
Will revert to you soon
Kavouss

2015-07-12 7:54 GMT+02:00 Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in>:

> All,
>
> I’ve updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our
> discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial
> work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from
> the ICG report in the combined proposal.
>
> Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this by
> July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
>
> I’m hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of incorporating
> feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly
> tied up with IETF matters next week.
>
> Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final
> section, that would be great.
>
> Thanks,
> Alissa
>
> [1]
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl=0
>
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