[Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

Jennifer Chung jen at icgsec.asia
Thu Oct 29 13:02:14 UTC 2015


Dear All,

The following versions of v9 have been uploaded to Dropbox for our records, see attached and short links below:

v9-redline (.docx): http://icgsec.asia/1P003qR 
v9-clean (.docx): http://icgsec.asia/1XBiZh7 
v9 (pdf): http://icgsec.asia/1XBjc43  --- this is the published version

The announcement details will be sent under separate cover.  Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer

-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Jennifer Chung
Sent: Thursday, October 29, 2015 3:56 AM
To: 'Alissa Cooper' <alissa at cooperw.in>; 'Joseph Alhadeff' <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>
Cc: 'Mueller, Milton L' <milton at gatech.edu>; 'IANA etc etc Coordination Group' <internal-cg at ianacg.org>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

Dear All,

Please find attached the a clean version of v9 (pdf) ready and scheduled for publication later today on the ICG web site.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer

-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper
Sent: Thursday, October 29, 2015 3:25 AM
To: Joseph Alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>
Cc: Mueller, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu>; IANA etc etc Coordination Group <internal-cg at ianacg.org>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

All,

Thanks for your edits. The attached version incorporates them as follows:

- Accepted Wolf-Ulrich’s edits. I added a footnote to the IANAPLAN proposal, paragraph 3004, that reads “This draft is being held for publication in the RFC Editor’s queue.”

- Accepted most of Milton’s edits, or made the edits with minor modifications. Exceptions: para 50 (language is taken directly from CWG proposal), para 56 (potentially substantive change in the characterization that would require further discussion - agree with Manal that this is accurate as-is).

- Accepted Paul’s edits, or made the edits with minor modifications. Re para X016 - I deleted the final sentence. We previously had a comment from Daniel asking if it could be removed, and I also found it vague and that it doesn’t really flow from the previous sentences, even with Lynn’s improvements.

- Accepted Lynn’s edits.

- Accepted Manal’s edits.

- Accepted Mary’s edits.

- Joe: I accepted Milton’s edit to para 98, which others seemed to support, so this should resolve the issue you mentioned.

Jennifer will produce a clean version for publication on our site today.

Thanks all!
Alissa

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