[Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

Mary Uduma mnuduma at yahoo.com
Thu Oct 29 00:06:29 UTC 2015


I am sorry Alissa,
Here.
 


     On Wednesday, October 28, 2015 11:54 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:
   

 Hi Mary,
I do not see any edits from you in the attachment. Could you double-check and re-send or send them in email?
Thanks,Alissa

On Oct 29, 2015, at 2:12 AM, Mary Uduma <mnuduma at yahoo.com> wrote:
+1 Lynn,
I did 3 minor edits (paragraphs 8 and 109).  Happy to withdraw if considered not  necessary.
Mary Uduma



 


     On Wednesday, October 28, 2015 4:02 PM, Lynn St.Amour <Lynn at LStAmour.org> wrote:
   

 Thanks Alissa and everyone in the secretariat,

I also suggested a few minor clarifying edits (keeping to the ICG agreement for truly minimal changes).

This is looking very good and is quite clear.

Best,
Lynn





On Oct 27, 2015, at 11:34 PM, Paul Wilson <pwilson at apnic.net> wrote:

> Here’s a few small changes to the Exec Summary section, in addition to Milton’s.
> 
> I have one question, about the last sentence in X016, which I really cannot follow.
> 
> Paul.
> 
> 
> 
> On 27 Oct 2015, at 3:18, Alissa Cooper wrote:
> 
>> Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat produces the PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for publication with our agreed status update announcement on October 29.
>> 
>> If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Alissa
>> 
>> Dropbox:
>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0>
>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0>
>> 
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