[Internal-cg] Proposal for final review
Paul Wilson
pwilson at apnic.net
Wed Oct 28 03:10:17 UTC 2015
On 27 Oct 2015, at 20:01, WUKnoben wrote:
> Thanks Alissa,
>
> my comments re the clean version:
>
> 1. on the front page I’d like to suggest to write the full name of
> the CWG as it’s done with all the other acronyms (e.g. ICG and
> CCWG).
Agree.
> 2. shouldn’t there be given a hint that text with yellow background
> is expected to be replaced/removed after the CWG dependency is
> disappeared?
If that’s the intention, then yes it should be clarified.
> 3. page 6, X018, penultimate line: “...ICG will secure
> confirmation...”.
> 4. page 20, 51: same as 3.
> 5. page 23, 65: same as 3.
I concede this is as discussed in the meeting, though I personally do
not agree.
The IGC will seek confirmation, but it is not our choice as to whether
we secure it. If we do not secure it, then I find it very hard to
believe that we would take no action. Rather I would strongly support
the submission of the proposal, with a note that we have NOT (yet)
secured this confirmation.
If the ICG prefers “secure” then so be it; it is a bridge we can
cross (rather than burn) if we come to it. :-)
> 6. Coming back to my earlier question re the IANAPLAN proposal (ICG
> para 3004): “This Internet-Draft will expire on July 10, 2015” is
> confusing
I have no opinion as this is part of a community proposal.
Paul.
>
> Best regards
>
> Wolf-Ulrich
>
>
>
> From: Alissa Cooper
> Sent: Monday, October 26, 2015 6:18 PM
> To: IANA etc etc Coordination Group
> Subject: [Internal-cg] Proposal for final review
>
> Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal
> reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing
> and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat
> produces the PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for
> publication with our agreed status update announcement on October 29.
>
> If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the
> mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28.
>
> Thanks,
> Alissa
>
> Dropbox:
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0
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> Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal
> reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing
> and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat
> produces the PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for
> publication with our agreed status update announcement on October 29.
>
> If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the
> mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28.
>
> Thanks,
> Alissa
>
> Dropbox:
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0
> <https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0>
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0
> <https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0>
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