[Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

WUKnoben wolf-ulrich.knoben at t-online.de
Tue Oct 27 10:01:26 UTC 2015


Thanks Alissa,

my comments re the clean version:

1. on the front page I’d like to suggest to write the full name of the CWG as it’s done with all the other acronyms (e.g. ICG and CCWG).
2. shouldn’t there be given a hint that text with yellow background is expected to be replaced/removed after the CWG dependency is disappeared?
3. page 6, X018, penultimate line: “...ICG will secure confirmation...”.
4. page 20, 51: same as 3.
5. page 23, 65: same as 3.
6. Coming back to my earlier question re the IANAPLAN proposal (ICG para 3004): “This Internet-Draft will expire on July 10, 2015” is confusing

Best regards

Wolf-Ulrich



From: Alissa Cooper 
Sent: Monday, October 26, 2015 6:18 PM
To: IANA etc etc Coordination Group 
Subject: [Internal-cg] Proposal for final review

Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat produces the PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for publication with our agreed status update announcement on October 29. 

If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28. 

Thanks,
Alissa

Dropbox:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0




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Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat produces the PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for publication with our agreed status update announcement on October 29.

If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28. 

Thanks,
Alissa

Dropbox:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0>
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0>





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