[Internal-cg] Comments on ICG proposal draft v5

[Alissa Cooper]

Hi Alan,

One question below:

> On Oct 23, 2015, at 8:23 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:
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>> 069: Proposed edit for third sentence: Change “However” to “On the whole”.

Para 69 does not contain the word “However” (even in earlier versions we were working off of earlier last week). Could you clarify which specific sentence you wanted to edit?

Thanks,
Alissa