[Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..

[Lynn St.Amour]

Great work Manal, Joe, all,

My review is attached and in dropbox.

Best,
Lynn

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On Oct 19, 2015, at 1:56 PM, "Subrenat, Jean-Jacques" <jjs at dyalog.net> wrote:

> Thank you Jennifer!
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> ----- Mail original -----
> De: "Jennifer Chung" <jen at icgsec.asia>
> ?: "Jean-Jacques' 'Subrenat" <jjs at dyalog.net>
> Cc: "Joseph Alhadeff" <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>, internal-cg at ianacg.org, manal at tra.gov.eg
> Envoy?: Lundi 19 Octobre 2015 18:36:55
> Objet: RE: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..
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> Dear Jean-Jacques and all,
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> As requested, attached and linked below, please find a version of the summary document with Jean-Jacques' tracked changes.  
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> Dropbox short link: http://icgsec.asia/1MzoPYB 
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> Please let me know if you have any questions.
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> Best Regards,
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> Jennifer
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Subrenat, Jean-Jacques [mailto:jjs at dyalog.net] 
> Sent: Monday, October 19, 2015 5:12 PM
> To: Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia>
> Cc: Joseph Alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>; internal-cg at ianacg.org; manal at tra.gov.eg
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..
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> Dear All,
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> because of some technical problem, currently I cannot do corrections on the proposed text in Dropbox.
> I would therefore kindly request Secretariat to transfer my proposed corrections (enclosed) to the right location in Dropbox. Thank you.
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> Jean-Jacques.
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> ----- Mail original -----
> De: "Jennifer Chung" <jen at icgsec.asia>
> ?: "Joseph Alhadeff" <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>, internal-cg at ianacg.org, manal at tra.gov.eg
> Envoy?: Lundi 19 Octobre 2015 15:47:36
> Objet: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..
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> Dear All,
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> Please find the summary document circulated by Manal and Joe previously.
> Fig. 2 has been updated to the version as used during the ICG Engagement Session slide deck this morning.
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> Dropbox short link: http://icgsec.asia/1GmrR5Q 
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> Please let me know if you have any questions.
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> Best Regards,
> 
> Jennifer
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Joseph Alhadeff
> Sent: Thursday, October 15, 2015 3:56 PM
> To: internal-cg at ianacg.org; manal at tra.gov.eg
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..
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> A slight edit to Manal's email, the document was compiled by her with some help from me.  Thanks for all of your work!
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> Joe
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> Sent from my Android phone using TouchDown (www.nitrodesk.com)
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> -----Original Message-----
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> From: Manal Ismail [manal at tra.gov.eg]
> Received: Thursday, 15 Oct 2015, 5:27PM
> To: internal-cg at ianacg.org [internal-cg at ianacg.org]
> CC: joseph alhadeff (joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com) [joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com]; Alissa Cooper (alissa at cooperw.in) [alissa at cooperw.in]
> Subject: Public Comment Summary Report ..
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> Dear All ..
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> With sincere apologies for the delay, please find attached the Public Comment Summary Report, compiled by Joe and myself, as agreed during our face-to-face meeting in LA .. It is basically comprised of text drafted by colleagues who volunteered (or were volunteered :)), and agreed on the mailing list by ICG members ..
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> Kindly note that:
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> -          All sources, to our best, are included in green italics between
> square brackets ..
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> -          There are still highlights in yellow and comments where we were
> not sure, but thought to move the discussion to the list ..
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> -          Suggested edits to the agreed text are marked in track changes ..
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> -          Where there are 2 slightly different versions of the same text,
> both are included for us to decide ..
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> Looking forward to our discussions in Dublin ..
> Safe travels to everyone ..
> 
> Kind Regards
> --Manal
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> PS: Joe and I worked on different versions and I'm attaching a merge, so all edits appear to come from me .. Yet I tried to mark Joe's comments as received .. Joe, please feel free to flag any inaccuracies ..
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