[Internal-cg] tranistion proposal questions

[Daniel Karrenberg]

Executive summary. Page 3.

Daniel

On 18.10.15 15:59 , WUKnoben wrote:
> I'm checking "IANA-transition-proposal-v4". Where can I find X013 and
> X014 Daniel is referring to?
> 
> 
> Wolf-Ulrich
> 
> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- From: Daniel Karrenberg
> Sent: Sunday, October 18, 2015 12:45 PM
> To: Subrenat, Jean-Jacques
> Cc: IANA etc etc Coordination Group
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] tranistion proposal questions
> 
> Misunderstanding: These are quotes from our current draft; not what I am
> proposing we say.
> 
> In fact I have similar doubts and that prompted me to point this out.
> 
> See my subsequent message for what I propose we *do* say.
> 
> Daniel
> 
> On 18.10.15 12:37 , Subrenat, Jean-Jacques wrote:
>> Daniel,
>>
>> fine. I just have some doubts about a notion in your para. 104, where
>> you say "...the ICG will make a
>> final determination about whether to recommend that NTIA approve the
>> transition proposal". To be accurate, I don't think we will
>> "recommend" to NTIA to accept our Proposal, we will just send it to
>> them, and they will decide whether to accept or not. In simple terms,
>> our Transition Plan is in fact a recommendation.
>>
>> Jean-Jacques.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ----- Mail original -----
>> De: "Daniel Karrenberg" <daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net>
>> À: "IANA etc etc Coordination Group" <Internal-cg at ianacg.org>
>> Envoyé: Dimanche 18 Octobre 2015 10:58:26
>> Objet: [Internal-cg] tranistion proposal questions
>>
>>
>> I tried to get recognised just before the break.
>> Here is what I was going to raise. Here is a, possibly incomplete, set
>> of language that refers to the dependency of the CWG proposal on the
>> accountability work:
>>
>> -------
>>
>> 47 Once the CCWG has concluded its work on these mechanisms, the ICG
>> will seek confirmation from the CWG that its requirements have been met.
>> At that point the ICG will make a final determination as to whether it
>> considers the names proposal to be complete.
>>
>> 62 The ICG will seek confirmation that the CCWG final Work Stream 1
>> proposal meets the CWG requirements. If the CCWG output does not meet
>> the needs as contemplated by the names proposal, the CWG has indicated
>> it will revise its proposal. Because of this dependency it is impossible
>> for the ICG to conclude its assessment of the accountability mechanisms
>> with regards to the names functions at this time.
>>
>> 104 After the finalization of CCWG Work Stream 1, the ICG will make a
>> final determination about whether to recommend that NTIA approve the
>> transition proposal. Based on the outcome of the evaluation described
>> above, the ICG is planning to recommend that NTIA approve the transition
>> proposal.
>>
>> X013 The ICG has noted that the names proposal is complete on the
>> condition that the dependencies on ICANN-level accountability
>> mechanisms, currently under development by the Cross Community Working
>> Group on Enhancing ICANN Accountability (CCWG), are concluded as
>> specified in the names proposal.
>>
>> X014 Once the CCWG has concluded its work on these mechanisms, the ICG
>> will seek confirmation from the CWG that its requirements have been met.
>> At that point the ICG will make a final determination as to whether it
>> considers the names proposal to be complete.
>>
>> -----
>>
>> This has sufficient variation to be confusing.
>> I strongly feel that we need to be consistent and as clear as possible
>> in what we write about this dependency.
>>
>> All we have committed to is for the CWG to say that they the
>> accountability work meets their requirements. Maybe we should say just
>> that and avoid all the variety in this language?
>>
>> Daniel
>>
>>
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