[Internal-cg] Final Published Version of FAQ (.doc & .rtf)

[Mary Uduma]

Thank you Manal, Alissa Secretariat and Colleagues for the good and hard work in producing the documents.
I have just a small edit on the question 4. (Tasks)Can we change sub 1 and 2 under task 1 to read1.a soliciting proposal..........................1.b soliciting input ........................If I am late, please ignoreQuestion 19 seems a bit confusing in terms of which target date we are referring to  - ICG, Fadi's or proposed extension of IANA contract by NTIA - 
However, if I am late in raising this, please ignore also, as I can live with it.
See attached.
Mary Uduma





 


     On Thursday, July 30, 2015 6:51 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com> wrote:
   

 Colleagues:

In phrasing we should be careful not to imply that there is one overall 
oversight model. there are rather oversight models of the substantive 
parts, which in reality is today's reality as well.

Joe

On 7/29/2015 9:05 PM, Manal Ismail wrote:
> Many thanks Alissa for your comments ..
>
> All ..
> On a second reading, I suggest adding a question before 21 stating: How does the overall oversight model of the combined proposal look like? (or something along the lines); and provide the modified overall diagram as an answer to this .. Does this make sense?
>
> I suggest this question (20') to be inserted under section VII " About ICG combined proposal public comment period" after renaming it to either:
> - About ICG combined proposal
> or
> - About ICG combined proposal and the public comment period
>
> Thoughts ?
>
> I just didn't want to introduce a question that would affect the numbering of the working version at hand ..
>
> Kind Regards
> --Manal
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:alissa at cooperw.in]
> Sent: Thursday, July 30, 2015 2:22 AM
> To: Manal Ismail
> Cc: Russ Mundy; Yannis Li; internal-cg at ianacg.org
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Final Published Version of FAQ (.doc & .rtf)
>
> Hi Manal,
>
> Some edits are attached. Overall I think this looks good.
>
> Alissa
>
>
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