[Internal-cg] public comment web page v3

[Alissa Cooper]

I have a suggestion for how to proceed with this: I think we should focus on finalizing the executive summary for the proposal, and then just use the executive summary text for the Development Process and Proposal Summary sections of the public comment web site. That way we don’t need to duplicate efforts editing both documents, at least for those sections.

I’ve done a bit of editing in the attached, mostly editorial changes.

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On Jul 22, 2015, at 9:03 AM, Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia> wrote:

> Thank you Manal.  I have also added an edit to the last section re
> 'Completed Community Public Comment Periods'.
> 
> All - the latest version is attached and in the Dropbox folder for your
> review.
> 
> Dropbox link to v3-MI-JC: http://icgsec.asia/1GCUB3w 
> Dropbox folder: http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2 
> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions.
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Jennifer
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Manal Ismail [mailto:manal at tra.gov.eg] 
> Sent: Wednesday, July 22, 2015 9:27 AM
> To: Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia>; 'Lynn St.Amour' <Lynn at LStAmour.org>;
> internal-cg at ianacg.org
> Subject: RE: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v3
> 
> Thanks Jennifer ..
> 
> Thanks Lynn ..
> Please find attached and on Dropbox a few remarks marked in track changes ..
> 
> Kind Regards
> --Manal  
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of
> Jennifer Chung
> Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 6:21 PM
> To: 'Lynn St.Amour'; internal-cg at ianacg.org
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2
> 
> Hi All,
> 
> Please find the public comment web page v3 (final section links added,
> public comment date inserted) attached and linked below:
> Dropbox link to v3: http://icgsec.asia/1RN2v60
> 
> All previous versions of this document have been preserved and moved to a
> different Dropbox subfolder called 'Web page materials' (CoordinationGroup >
> Web page materials): http://icgsec.asia/1MFLRyE 
> 
> All the latest versions of all materials for the ICG public comment period
> launch is available here for your review (CoordinationGroup > Public
> Comment): http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2 
> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions.
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Jennifer
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Lynn
> St.Amour
> Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 11:45 AM
> To: internal-cg at ianacg.org
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2
> 
> Hello everyone,
> 
> just trying to move this forward in our chair's absence. 
> 
> Could the secretariat include relevant links (per the request below) and
> ensure the latest is posted on dropbox.
> 
> ICG members, could we have any remaining comments on this by this Friday
> 24th July?  I will then incorporate the feedback and turn it around for
> final approval and posting.
> 
> Must all be DONE by July 29th for start of public comment period,
> 
> Best,
> Lynn
> 
> 
> On Jul 12, 2015, at 1:54 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:
> 
>> All,
>> 
>> I've updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our
> discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial
> work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from
> the ICG report in the combined proposal.
>> 
>> Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this 
>> by
> July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
>> 
>> I'm hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of 
>> incorporating
> feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly
> tied up with IETF matters next week.
>> 
>> Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final
> section, that would be great.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Alissa
>> 
>> [1]
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl
> =0
>> 
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