[Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

[Paul Wilson]

Thanks Lynn,

I’ve added a set of edits to the Word document, now saved in a new 
file:

   public-comment-web-page-v3-MI-JC-PW.docx

on the dropbox.


Hope I haven’t collided with anyone else’s editing work.

Regards.

Paul.



On 22 Jul 2015, at 1:44, Lynn St.Amour wrote:

> Hello everyone,
>
> just trying to move this forward in our chair's absence.
>
> Could the secretariat include relevant links (per the request below) 
> and ensure the latest is posted on dropbox.
>
> ICG members, could we have any remaining comments on this by this 
> Friday 24th July?  I will then incorporate the feedback and turn it 
> around for final approval and posting.
>
> Must all be DONE by July 29th for start of public comment period,
>
> Best,
> Lynn
>
>
> On Jul 12, 2015, at 1:54 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:
>
>> All,
>>
>> I’ve updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our 
>> discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some 
>> editorial work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived 
>> directly from the ICG report in the combined proposal.
>>
>> Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize 
>> this by July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
>>
>> I’m hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of 
>> incorporating feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders 
>> since I will be mostly tied up with IETF matters next week.
>>
>> Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the 
>> final section, that would be great.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Alissa
>>
>> [1] 
>> https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl=0
>>
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Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC                        dg at apnic.net
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