[Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

[WUKnoben]

Thanks Lynn and others for the work so far,

Isn't the ICG coming up with recommendations regarding the "combined proposal", too? If that is the case - and I think it should be - then I suggest to make this clear under "Combined Transition Proposal Summary":
<<This combined transition proposal contains the report of the ICG together with the related recommendations and the RFP responses from each of the three operational communities>>

Best regards

Wolf-Ulrich

-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- 
From: Jennifer Chung 
Sent: Wednesday, July 22, 2015 12:20 AM 
To: 'Lynn St.Amour' ; internal-cg at ianacg.org 
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2 

Hi All,

Please find the public comment web page v3 (final section links added,
public comment date inserted) attached and linked below:
Dropbox link to v3: http://icgsec.asia/1RN2v60

All previous versions of this document have been preserved and moved to a
different Dropbox subfolder called 'Web page materials' (CoordinationGroup >
Web page materials): http://icgsec.asia/1MFLRyE 

All the latest versions of all materials for the ICG public comment period
launch is available here for your review (CoordinationGroup > Public
Comment): http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2 

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer


-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Lynn
St.Amour
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 11:45 AM
To: internal-cg at ianacg.org
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

Hello everyone,

just trying to move this forward in our chair's absence. 

Could the secretariat include relevant links (per the request below) and
ensure the latest is posted on dropbox.

ICG members, could we have any remaining comments on this by this Friday
24th July?  I will then incorporate the feedback and turn it around for
final approval and posting.

Must all be DONE by July 29th for start of public comment period,

Best,
Lynn


On Jul 12, 2015, at 1:54 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:

> All,
> 
> I've updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our
discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial
work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from
the ICG report in the combined proposal.
> 
> Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this by
July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
> 
> I'm hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of incorporating
feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly
tied up with IETF matters next week.
> 
> Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final
section, that would be great.
> 
> Thanks,
> Alissa
> 
> [1]
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl
=0
> 
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