[Internal-cg] Draft email to accompany proposal

Joseph Alhadeff joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com
Thu Mar 3 11:15:30 UTC 2016


fine with both versions, agree with Russ on preference.

Joe

On 3/2/2016 6:15 PM, Russ Mundy wrote:
> Alissa,
>
> Nicely worded letter.  I think JJ’s suggested change reads a bit smoother but if there is strong preference for original structure, I’m okay with that also.
>
> Russ M
>
> On Mar 2, 2016, at 2:21 AM, Subrenat, Jean-Jacques <jjs at dyalog.net> wrote:
>
>> Hello Alissa, Patrik and Mohamed,
>>
>> thanks for the draft message, which is in line with our online discussion yesterday 1st of March.
>>
>> I would just suggest one modification, for the sake of clarity:
>> "the ICG expects that the ICANN Board will send the report to NTIA within 14 days of receiving the proposal, without making any changes (...)",
>>
>> instead of:
>> "the ICG expects that the ICANN Board will send the report to NTIA without making any changes within 14 days of receiving the proposal (...)".
>>
>> Best regards,
>> Jean-Jacques.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>>
>> ----- Mail original -----
>> De: "Alissa Cooper" <alissa at cooperw.in>
>> À: "IANA etc etcCoordination Group" <internal-cg at ianacg.org>
>> Envoyé: Mercredi 2 Mars 2016 05:43:36
>> Objet: [Internal-cg] Draft email to accompany proposal
>>
>> See below. This would be for use on March 10, ideally. Feedback appreciated.
>>
>> ——
>>
>> To: Assistant Secretary Larry Strickling
>> In care of Steve Crocker, ICANN Board Chair
>>
>> The IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) has finalized the IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal and is hereby forwarding it to the ICANN Board for transmission to NTIA. The final proposal is attached to this email and available at <link>. The ICG unanimously supports this proposal and recommends that all affected parties implement it.
>>
>> According to the agreement reached between the ICG and the ICANN Board in November 2014 [1][2], the ICG expects that the ICANN Board will send the report to NTIA without making any changes within 14 days of receiving the proposal and that the Board will make public any communications it sends to NTIA together with the proposal. Given that the ICG has received no indications from the Board of any remaining concerns with the proposal, we do not expect the Board to document any concerns with it in its correspondence to NTIA.
>>
>> Please feel free to get in touch with us if you have questions.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Alissa Cooper, Patrik Fälström, and Mohamed El Bashir
>> on behalf of the ICG
>>
>> [1] http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/internal-cg/2014-November/002245.html
>> [2] https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/iana-transition-assembly-finalization-24dec14-en.pdf
>>
>> ——
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