[Internal-cg] FW: Please find attached revised summary proposal

[Jennifer Chung]

FYI please see the email from Joe below with the attached proposed text.

 

From: joseph alhadeff [mailto:joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com] 
Sent: Friday, September 25, 2015 1:47 PM
To: Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia>
Subject: Fwd: Please find attached revised summary proposal

 

 

FYI

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Please find attached revised summary proposal


Date: 

Tue, 22 Sep 2015 09:49:09 -0400


From: 

joseph alhadeff  <mailto:joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com> <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>


Organization: 

Oracle Corporation


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internal-cg at icann.org <mailto:internal-cg at icann.org>   <mailto:internal-cg at icann.org> <internal-cg at icann.org>

 

Please note that I found no cross reference in our proposal to the role 
of government as multistakeholder participant that would address the 
concern raised that such participation may bee seen as at odds with the 
NTIA criteria.  I have tried to raise an innocuous addition as a 
footnote to deal with the concern in a neutral fashion.  I have 
highlighted it in red to facilitate ease of comment.  Those topics 
highlighted in yellow are possible places where other more specific work 
may supersede this language and be replaced by a cross reference.  There 
is one margin question as well.
 
Thanks.
 

 

 

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