[Internal-cg] proposed text change with regards to IPR

[Russ Housley]

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Minor suggestion...
s/are therefore clear/are clear/


On Sep 19, 2015, at 2:37 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:

> Yesterday I got this task:
> 
> 8. Arkko to draft text by 27 September for Part 0 indicating updated
> status of CWG on IANA IPR and noting that items raised in 
> comments are being dealt with as implementation details.
> 
> I have now uploaded a new file under “Public Comment”, file
> IANA-transition-proposal-IPR-changes.doc that contains an
> edited version of the proposal that went for public comment.
> It contains two changes, one on the executive summary and
> the other one on part 0. Take a look at the file, or these two
> screen captures for the changes:
> 
> <ipr-change-1st.jpeg>
> 
> 
> 
> <ipr-change-2nd.jpeg>
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