[Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report - f2f edits ..

[Jennifer Chung]

Dear All,

Attached and linked below, please find a formatted version of the summary
document.  I have made some edits for consistency (capitalization,
citations, etc.) and have added section and sub-section numbering/lettering
in the same format as the combined proposal.

Dropbox short links:
clean-LSA-format.docx: http://icgsec.asia/1PYeawa 
clean-LSA.docx: http://icgsec.asia/1M4zeQ7 

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer

-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Lynn
St.Amour
Sent: Thursday, October 29, 2015 4:34 PM
To: Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg>
Cc: internal-cg at ianacg.org
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report - f2f edits ..

Hi Manal, Joe,

thanks for all the work.  This was not an easy task.  

Overall, I think it looks good.  I made some edits, just trying to tighten
up some text. 

Best,

Lynn


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