[Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..

[Subrenat, Jean-Jacques]

Dear All,

because of some technical problem, currently I cannot do corrections on the proposed text in Dropbox.
I would therefore kindly request Secretariat to transfer my proposed corrections (enclosed) to the right location in Dropbox. Thank you.

Jean-Jacques.









----- Mail original -----
De: "Jennifer Chung" <jen at icgsec.asia>
À: "Joseph Alhadeff" <joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com>, internal-cg at ianacg.org, manal at tra.gov.eg
Envoyé: Lundi 19 Octobre 2015 15:47:36
Objet: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..

Dear All,

Please find the summary document circulated by Manal and Joe previously.
Fig. 2 has been updated to the version as used during the ICG Engagement
Session slide deck this morning.

Dropbox short link: http://icgsec.asia/1GmrR5Q 

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer

-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of
Joseph Alhadeff
Sent: Thursday, October 15, 2015 3:56 PM
To: internal-cg at ianacg.org; manal at tra.gov.eg
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Public Comment Summary Report ..

A slight edit to Manal's email, the document was compiled by her with some
help from me.  Thanks for all of your work!

Joe

Sent from my Android phone using TouchDown (www.nitrodesk.com)

-----Original Message-----

From: Manal Ismail [manal at tra.gov.eg]
Received: Thursday, 15 Oct 2015, 5:27PM
To: internal-cg at ianacg.org [internal-cg at ianacg.org]
CC: joseph alhadeff (joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com)
[joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com]; Alissa Cooper (alissa at cooperw.in)
[alissa at cooperw.in]
Subject: Public Comment Summary Report ..

Dear All ..

With sincere apologies for the delay, please find attached the Public
Comment Summary Report, compiled by Joe and myself, as agreed during our
face-to-face meeting in LA .. It is basically comprised of text drafted by
colleagues who volunteered (or were volunteered :)), and agreed on the
mailing list by ICG members ..

Kindly note that:

-          All sources, to our best, are included in green italics between
square brackets ..

-          There are still highlights in yellow and comments where we were
not sure, but thought to move the discussion to the list ..

-          Suggested edits to the agreed text are marked in track changes ..

-          Where there are 2 slightly different versions of the same text,
both are included for us to decide ..

Looking forward to our discussions in Dublin ..
Safe travels to everyone ..

Kind Regards
--Manal

PS: Joe and I worked on different versions and I'm attaching a merge, so all
edits appear to come from me .. Yet I tried to mark Joe's comments as
received .. Joe, please feel free to flag any inaccuracies ..
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