[Internal-cg] Suggested New 02

[Daniel Karrenberg]

All improvements. This reads quite well now.

Daniel

On 18.10.15 16:27 , Alissa Cooper wrote:
> I’ve made some additional edits for clarity and consistency of
> terminology in the attached.
> 
> Secretariat, could you make sure all of the versions of this get posted
> to Dropbox?
> 
> Thanks,
> Alissa
> 
> 
> 
> 
>> On Oct 18, 2015, at 2:15 PM, Daniel Karrenberg
>> <daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net <mailto:daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net>> wrote:
>>
>> Signed PGP part
>> PAtrik,
>>
>> I believe the included reads better and this bit is important enough
>> to make it read well. So I offer these improvements. However if any
>> part of these edits gives you any grief, just disregard and move on.
>>
>> Daniel
>>
>>
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