[Internal-cg] Suggested New 02

[Alissa Cooper]

I’ve made some additional edits for clarity and consistency of terminology in the attached.

Secretariat, could you make sure all of the versions of this get posted to Dropbox?

Thanks,
Alissa


> On Oct 18, 2015, at 2:15 PM, Daniel Karrenberg <daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net> wrote:
> 
> Signed PGP part
> PAtrik,
> 
> I believe the included reads better and this bit is important enough
> to make it read well. So I offer these improvements. However if any
> part of these edits gives you any grief, just disregard and move on.
> 
> Daniel
> 
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