[Internal-cg] Suggested New 02
Subrenat, Jean-Jacques
jjs at dyalog.net
Sun Oct 18 12:34:02 UTC 2015
Thanks Patrik for working on this so quickly.
In the chat this morning, a colleague said "registries" was preferable to "resources", and also argued against "shared".
In your latest draft, paragraph 1 speaks of "resources", but then in para 2 this becomes "shared resources". My concern is that we should be consistent throughout (either resources, or shared resources), so for para 2 may I suggest (my emphasis in UPPER CASE):
"Some of the most important shared resources (USUALLY REFERRED TO AS registries) are Internet Protocol addresses, Domain Names/DNS Root Zone Management, and Protocol Parameters. The IANA Functions Operator (IFO) performs a set of administrative coordinating TASKS for these and others. Each OF THESE RESOURCES is operated under a policy defined by a specific community, including THOSE KNOWN CURRENTLY AS THE Operational Communities (OCs). THE services THUS provided are referred to as the Internet Assigned Numbers Authority (IANA) Function."
Jean-Jacques.
----- Mail original -----
De: "demi getschko" <epusp75 at gmail.com>
À: "Patrik Fältström" <paf at frobbit.se>
Cc: "ICG" <internal-cg at ianacg.org>
Envoyé: Dimanche 18 Octobre 2015 12:03:04
Objet: Re: [Internal-cg] Suggested New 02
ok for me.
thanks
demi
On Sun, Oct 18, 2015 at 11:56 AM, Patrik Fältström < paf at frobbit.se > wrote:
Here is a word version of the text that is the proposed 02.
Patrik
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