[Internal-cg] Combined proposal executive summary and public comment material

[Alissa Cooper]

Hi all,

I’ve put together a skeleton of an executive summary for the combined transition proposal. I put it into the combined proposal document so folks can see it in context. Essentially all of the words in the executive summary are directly copied from existing documents (NTIA announcement, ICANN site about the creation of the ICG, our proposal finalization process), with some minor modifications for style. Anything in angle brackets (< >) still needs to be filled in. The summaries of the individual proposal components could be filled in now. The other pieces can’t be filled in until we do our assessment of the proposal. This has been shared with the small drafting team but I wanted to get it out to the whole group since we will discuss it at least a bit tomorrow.

I’ve also started putting together an outline of the materials we may need to have on our web site when we launch the public comment process on the combined proposal. I’ve included that as well since we’ve had the recent discussion on the mailing list and the last call about some of this content. The attached version reflects some comments from the drafting team (Milton in particular). In general I’ve tried to follow the approach Daniel recommended: keep the executive summary in the proposal document itself somewhat brief, and put the extra background material that public commenters may need on the web site. I didn’t actually draft the background section yet though — volunteer(s) to draft that would be great. The web site document also contains an initial list of questions to the public, drawn from our proposal assessment process and the NTIA criteria. 

We’ll have time for discussion of the direction of these at the F2F. Secretariat: please add these documents to the Dropbox.

Alissa

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