[Internal-cg] Document Content and Structure

[Milton L Mueller]

Hmmm, I missed what looks to have been an exciting meeting, so discount the following comments if they are uninformed or misinterpreting based on lack of context, but I am reacting only to Daniel K's statement:

> I oppose
> 
> 	- producing various versions for different audiences,
> 	- including explanatory material not intended for NTIA, and
> 	- copying or paraphrasing any existing documents.

Daniel seems to be operating from the assumption that it is only the NTIA that will read and react to our proposal. Is he forgetting the fact that before we can send it to the NTIA we are required to have a public comment period? This proposal may well require explanations or summaries that are appropriate for a general public audience but would not be needed for the NTIA. 

--MM