[Internal-cg] Preface for the combined proposal

Joseph Alhadeff joseph.alhadeff at oracle.com
Mon Jun 8 10:14:28 UTC 2015


I think it is useful for NTIA to have the document that developed community consensus; they can skip the parts they are already familiar with.

Joe
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> On Jun 7, 2015, at 6:36 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:
> 
> A few thoughts in response to various suggestions in this thread:
> 
> At this point I think we should focus on what preface material we need for the combined proposal that we will put out for public comment. We can edit, update, or replace it later before the proposal goes to NTIA. We should also keep in mind that we’ll have space on our web site to provide instructions and ask specific questions of the public during the public comment period, so that kind of material need not go in the preface. I think the preface should focus on the proposal itself and any explanation required to understand it (which could include a brief explanation of IANA as Milton suggested). I think our charter likely has useful language in it that we can re-use but does not sufficiently introduce the proposal on its own.
> 
> If it seems premature to be developing the preface now, that’s fine. We can wait until after ICANN 53.
> 
> I think we have plenty of volunteers to help with this (Milton, Lynn, Russ, Manal, Joe, and Jean-Jacques) — thank you.
> 
> Alissa
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