[Internal-cg] Proposal - 24 hrs review
Lynn St.Amour
Lynn at LStAmour.org
Wed Jul 29 20:25:58 UTC 2015
Thank you to Alissa and the secretariat for such a quick turnaround. This is looking very good.
I suggested a few edits for clarity, with my goal to keep edits to a minimum. The new doc. is in Dropbox (combined-proposal-v7- lsa).
Best regards,
Lynn
On Jul 29, 2015, at 4:11 PM, "Jennifer Chung" <jen at icgsec.asia> wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> Attached is v7-JC of the proposal that includes the following edits:
> - IANA requests diagram percentage of Number-related requests fixed
> - Visual summary diagram as discussed with Russ Mundy - fixed with key added
> (Alan's request)
>
> Dropbox link to document: http://icgsec.asia/1ShuICh
> Dropbox link to folder: http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2
>
> I note that per Martin's previous response,
> http://mm.ianacg.org/pipermail/internal-cg_ianacg.org/2015-July/001164.html,
> no new text will be added to this particular section.
>
> Deadline for any feedback is 05:00 UTC on July 30.
>
> Please let me know if you have any questions.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Jennifer
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of
> Alissa Cooper
> Sent: Wednesday, July 29, 2015 4:46 AM
> To: IANA etc etc Coordination Group <internal-cg at ianacg.org>
> Subject: [Internal-cg] Proposal - 24 hrs review
>
> Attached is v7 of the proposal, reflecting the changes discussed on the
> call. There are three items not yet reflected:
>
> - Changes to the IANA requests diagram flagged by Alan - Changes to the
> visual summary diagram as discussed with Russ Mundy - Text related to NTIA's
> authorization role to be provided on the mailing list by Martin
>
> I believe everything else has been captured in v7. The changes are also
> reflected in the executive summary and have been propagated as appropriate
> to the public comment web site.
>
> We will turn around the diagram changes as soon as we can.
>
> Deadline for any final feedback is 5:00 UTC on July 30.
>
> Jennifer: please add this document to Dropbox.
>
> Thanks,
> Alissa
>
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