[Internal-cg] Combined proposal v6

[Jennifer Chung]

Hi Russ and All,

Russ' edit has now been incorporated into v6 attached and linked for your
review - Dropbox v6 link: http://icgsec.asia/1CUwcvt 

Please be aware that there will be a lot of edits coming in around this
time, for clarity's sake - please go to this folder (CoordinationGroup >
Public Comment) for the latest versions of all documents - Dropbox folder
link: http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer

-----Original Message-----
From: Russ Mundy [mailto:mundy at tislabs.com] 
Sent: Friday, July 24, 2015 9:43 AM
To: Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia>; Lynn St.Amour <lynn at lstamour.org>;
internal-cg at ianacg.org
Cc: Russ Mundy <mundy at tislabs.com>; Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5


After some discussions with folks about possible clarification and
shortening of the words I submitted on 14 July for Section 3 of the combined
proposal (currently on page 14), I would like to suggest that the following
text replace the current sub-paragraph in total:

The ICG notes that, under the current IANA Functions Contract, the DNS Root
Zone Management process currently has three functional roles, i.e., the IANA
Functions Operator (IFO), the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM), and the Root Zone
Administrator (RZA).  The CWG Stewardship proposal (paragraph 150) states
"Post-transition, no authorization for Root Zone change requests will be
needed.", thus the RZA role need not be continued.  However, since there is
currently no agreement between the RZM and the IFO organizations for the
Root Zone Management process, the ICG notes that some form of agreement
between the IFO and RZM that clearly defines the roles and responsibilities
of both parties is essential for the secure, stable and resilient operation
of the Root Zone of the DNS when the NTIA withdraws from the Root Zone
Management process.

Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.

Russ M

On Jul 23, 2015, at 11:55 PM, Jennifer Chung <jen at icgsec.asia> wrote:

> Hi All,
> 
> Attached and linked is v5-MI-LSA-PW-JC.  Dropbox link:
> http://icgsec.asia/1JiezqA . This includes Paul's latest edits as well 
> as the requests from Manal below:
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