[Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5

[Paul Wilson]

Hi Lynn and all,

I have contributed some edits and saved the document on the Dropbox as 
“combined-proposal-v5-MI-LSA-PW.doc”

Also attached here.

Paul.


On 24 Jul 2015, at 2:53, Lynn St.Amour wrote:

> Again, thanks much Manal,
>
> To-date, I reviewed this through the ICG report section (only), and 
> made some edits to try and convey why the report was combined in this 
> way.  I would appreciate it if folks could review it carefully, as I 
> believe it is a critical point (and sensitive).  And, some of it may 
> be better suited to the Exec. Summary.
>
> Joe, I believe you had volunteered to send some draft text re the 
> Exec. summary.  If this is correct, can I do anything to help?  If I 
> have it wrong, I will look up the minutes (can't do that just now 
> though, unfortunately).
>
> And, could those individuals who have been participating in the CWG - 
> Stewardship and the CCWG efforts, please review the appropriate 
> sections to ensure they reflect the latest positions?
>
> Finally, we should aim to have  all comments on this and the public 
> web-site no later than this Friday, so that we can review the "very 
> near final" drafts of this on Monday, in order to meet our public 
> comment period timetable of July 31st.
>
> Many thanks,
>
> Lynn
>
> [combined-proposal-v5-MI-LSA.doc]
>
>
> On Jul 16, 2015, at 11:30 PM, Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg> wrote:
>
>> Dear All ..
>>
>> Please find attached, in track changes, to my best ..
>> It is far from perfect but I thought to share soonest to allow time 
>> for necessary iterations ..
>> My understanding is that the ICG will reflect the ultimate status 
>> (i.e. not the temporary situation), accordingly I tried to highlight, 
>> in blue, parts that I believe will need to be revisited after the 
>> CCWG finalize their work ..
>>
>> Apologies in advance if any of the points raised is not accurately 
>> reflected ..
>> Looking forward to receiving  your valuable inputs/feedback ..
>>
>> Kind Regards
>> --Manal
>>
>> From: Jennifer Chung [mailto:jen at icgsec.asia]
>> Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2015 5:38 AM
>> To: Manal Ismail; internal-cg at ianacg.org
>> Subject: Latest version of the combined proposal - v5
>>
>> Dear Manal and All,
>>
>> Attached is the latest version of the combined proposal v5 (attached 
>> and linked here: http://icgsec.asia/1I4DxJ8 ).  The version 
>> incorporates all prior edits and text from Manal, Alissa, Russ M., 
>> and Jari.
>>
>> Please feel free to use this version for your continued drafting.
>>
>> Please let me know if you have any questions.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>> Jennifer
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Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC                        dg at apnic.net
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