[Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5

[Lynn St.Amour]

Again, thanks much Manal,

To-date, I reviewed this through the ICG report section (only), and made some edits to try and convey why the report was combined in this way.  I would appreciate it if folks could review it carefully, as I believe it is a critical point (and sensitive).  And, some of it may be better suited to the Exec. Summary.  

Joe, I believe you had volunteered to send some draft text re the Exec. summary.  If this is correct, can I do anything to help?  If I have it wrong, I will look up the minutes (can't do that just now though, unfortunately).

And, could those individuals who have been participating in the CWG - Stewardship and the CCWG efforts, please review the appropriate sections to ensure they reflect the latest positions?

Finally, we should aim to have  all comments on this and the public web-site no later than this Friday, so that we can review the "very near final" drafts of this on Monday, in order to meet our public comment period timetable of July 31st.

Many thanks,

Lynn
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On Jul 16, 2015, at 11:30 PM, Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg> wrote:

> Dear All ..
>  
> Please find attached, in track changes, to my best ..
> It is far from perfect but I thought to share soonest to allow time for necessary iterations ..
> My understanding is that the ICG will reflect the ultimate status (i.e. not the temporary situation), accordingly I tried to highlight, in blue, parts that I believe will need to be revisited after the CCWG finalize their work ..
>  
> Apologies in advance if any of the points raised is not accurately reflected ..
> Looking forward to receiving  your valuable inputs/feedback ..
>  
> Kind Regards
> --Manal
>  
> From: Jennifer Chung [mailto:jen at icgsec.asia] 
> Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2015 5:38 AM
> To: Manal Ismail; internal-cg at ianacg.org
> Subject: Latest version of the combined proposal - v5
>  
> Dear Manal and All,
>  
> Attached is the latest version of the combined proposal v5 (attached and linked here: http://icgsec.asia/1I4DxJ8 ).  The version incorporates all prior edits and text from Manal, Alissa, Russ M., and Jari.
>  
> Please feel free to use this version for your continued drafting.
>  
> Please let me know if you have any questions.
>  
> Best Regards,
>  
> Jennifer
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