[Internal-cg] public comment web page v3

[Manal Ismail]

Thanks Jennifer ..

Thanks Lynn ..
Please find attached and on Dropbox a few remarks marked in track changes ..

Kind Regards
--Manal  

-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Jennifer Chung
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 6:21 PM
To: 'Lynn St.Amour'; internal-cg at ianacg.org
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

Hi All,

Please find the public comment web page v3 (final section links added, public comment date inserted) attached and linked below:
Dropbox link to v3: http://icgsec.asia/1RN2v60

All previous versions of this document have been preserved and moved to a different Dropbox subfolder called 'Web page materials' (CoordinationGroup > Web page materials): http://icgsec.asia/1MFLRyE 

All the latest versions of all materials for the ICG public comment period launch is available here for your review (CoordinationGroup > Public
Comment): http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2 

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Best Regards,

Jennifer


-----Original Message-----
From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Lynn St.Amour
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 11:45 AM
To: internal-cg at ianacg.org
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2

Hello everyone,

just trying to move this forward in our chair's absence. 

Could the secretariat include relevant links (per the request below) and ensure the latest is posted on dropbox.

ICG members, could we have any remaining comments on this by this Friday 24th July?  I will then incorporate the feedback and turn it around for final approval and posting.

Must all be DONE by July 29th for start of public comment period,

Best,
Lynn


On Jul 12, 2015, at 1:54 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa at cooperw.in> wrote:

> All,
> 
> I've updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our
discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from the ICG report in the combined proposal.
> 
> Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this 
> by
July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
> 
> I'm hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of 
> incorporating
feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly tied up with IETF matters next week.
> 
> Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final
section, that would be great.
> 
> Thanks,
> Alissa
> 
> [1]
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl
=0
> 
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