[Internal-cg] Executive Summary

[Milton L Mueller]

Manal
I like all of your editorial changes and the minor structural change to avoid redundancy.
Only one very small nit: I don't understand why people want to capitalize Board in 'ICANN board.'

--MM

From: Manal Ismail [mailto:manal at tra.gov.eg]
Sent: Friday, July 3, 2015 6:33 PM
To: Alissa Cooper; Milton L Mueller
Cc: internal-cg at ianacg.org
Subject: RE: [Internal-cg] Executive Summary

Please find attached and on Dropbox some minor edits and a few remarks .. I mainly moved, from the process part, everything that has to do with the assessment, as I found it to be redundant with the assessment part ..
Thoughts?

Kind Regards
--Manal

From: Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces at ianacg.org] On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper
Sent: Thursday, June 25, 2015 2:14 PM
To: Milton L Mueller
Cc: internal-cg at ianacg.org<mailto:internal-cg at ianacg.org>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Executive Summary

Thank you for getting these edits done this week.

Alissa

On Jun 25, 2015, at 7:02 AM, Milton L Mueller <mueller at syr.edu<mailto:mueller at syr.edu>> wrote:

I have added as much to the Exec Summary as I can.
It is available in Dropbox inside a new folder I created called "Combined Proposal"

Milton L Mueller
Laura J. and L. Douglas Meredith Professor
Syracuse University School of Information Studies
http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/
Internet Governance Project
http://internetgovernance.org<http://internetgovernance.org/>

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