[Internal-cg] Response to NTIA - final
Russ Housley
housley at vigilsec.com
Sun Jul 5 16:50:03 UTC 2015
Alissa:
I suggest a few very minor editorial changes:
OLD: As noted in your letter and discussed during ICANN 53, ...
NEW: As noted in your letter and discussions during ICANN 53, ...
OLD: ... the ICG’s assessment of the domain names proposal, ...
NEW: ... the ICG’s assessment of the names community proposal, ...
OLD: ... other aspects of the names proposal ...
NEW: ... other aspects of the names community proposal ...
Russ
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