[Internal-cg] Response to NTIA - final

Russ Housley housley at vigilsec.com
Sun Jul 5 16:50:03 UTC 2015


Alissa:

I suggest a few very minor editorial changes:

OLD:  As noted in your letter and discussed during ICANN 53, ...
NEW:  As noted in your letter and discussions during ICANN 53, ...

OLD: ... the ICG’s assessment of the domain names proposal, ...
NEW: ... the ICG’s assessment of the names community proposal, ...

OLD: ... other aspects of the names proposal ...
NEW: ... other aspects of the names community proposal ...

Russ


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