<div dir="ltr">Dear Alissa,<div>I have asked them three times not only red line revision mark but cross reference to CCWG Recs. .and ICG proposal which includes a combines proposals from three communities.</div><div>I was waiting for this doc. till 1315 UTC today and made my week-end free but I am not sure whether I will be able to read such a delicate, legal and bulky doc.</div><div>I do not yet know the arrangements in the</div><div>Bylaws coordination Team ,</div><div>CCWG </div><div>CWG</div><div>I will let you know as soon as I get any additional info.</div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-04-03 17:27 GMT+02:00 Alissa Cooper <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" target="_blank">alissa@cooperw.in</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word"><div>Thank you, Kavouss. Do you know if there is any plan to provide a redlined version or a list of the changes from the existing bylaws?</div><div><br></div><div>I think we should say that if any other ICG members want to provide feedback from the ICG perspective, they should send it to the ICG list by April 11 at 23:59 UTC. That way Kavouss and Milton will have a bit of time to consolidate comments and take them back.</div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><div><br></div><div>Alissa</div><br></font></span><div><blockquote type="cite"><div><div class="h5"><div>On Apr 3, 2016, at 8:43 AM, Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br></div></div><div><div><div class="h5"><div dir="ltr"><br><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Kavouss Arasteh</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span><br>Date: 2016-04-03 13:37 GMT+02:00<br>Subject: Fwd: [bylaws-coord] DRAFT NEW ICANN BYLAWS - 2 April 2016 version<br>To: Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" target="_blank">alissa@cooperw.in</a>>, Mohamed El Bashir <<a href="mailto:mbashir@mbash.net" target="_blank">mbashir@mbash.net</a>>, Patrik Fältström <<a href="mailto:paf@frobbit.se" target="_blank">paf@frobbit.se</a>>, "<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" target="_blank">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" target="_blank">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>>, "Mueller, Milton L" <<a href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu" target="_blank">milton@gatech.edu</a>><br><br><br><div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Alissa</div><div>Deal Milton</div><div>Deal All,</div><div>On 1314 European Central Time, ,1114 UTC, as a Member of Bylaws Coordination Group, I have received the following.</div><div>It was expected to receive this draft Yesterday .</div><div>I will start immediately to examine and prepare comments.</div><div>No doubt I will share those comment with you .However, due to the importance and critical cirsumstances, you may also wish to kindly send either to Alissa ,Milton or me your comment, if any, within the time limit specified in thext</div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss <br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div>---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">John Jeffrey via bylaws-coord</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org" target="_blank">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a>></span><br>Date: 2016-04-03 13:16 GMT+02:00<br>Subject: [bylaws-coord] DRAFT NEW ICANN BYLAWS - 2 April 2016 version<br>To: <a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org" target="_blank">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a><br>Cc: "Flanagan, Sharon" <<a href="mailto:sflanagan@sidley.com" target="_blank">sflanagan@sidley.com</a>>, "Cc: Zagorin, Janet S." <<a href="mailto:jzagorin@sidley.com" target="_blank">jzagorin@sidley.com</a>>, "Hilton, Tyler" <<a href="mailto:thilton@sidley.com" target="_blank">thilton@sidley.com</a>>, ICANN-Adler <<a href="mailto:ICANN@adlercolvin.com" target="_blank">ICANN@adlercolvin.com</a>>, "Hofheimer, Joshua T." <<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com" target="_blank">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>>, "Mohan, Vivek" <<a href="mailto:vivek.mohan@sidley.com" target="_blank">vivek.mohan@sidley.com</a>>, "Clark, Michael A." <<a href="mailto:mclark@sidley.com" target="_blank">mclark@sidley.com</a>>, "Boucher, Rick" <<a href="mailto:rboucher@sidley.com" target="_blank">rboucher@sidley.com</a>>, Sidley ICANN CCWG <<a href="mailto:sidleyicannccwg@sidley.com" target="_blank">sidleyicannccwg@sidley.com</a>>, "Kerry, Cameron" <<a href="mailto:ckerry@sidley.com" target="_blank">ckerry@sidley.com</a>>, "McNicholas, Edward R." <<a href="mailto:emcnicholas@sidley.com" target="_blank">emcnicholas@sidley.com</a>>, Daniel Halloran <<a href="mailto:daniel.halloran@icann.org" target="_blank">daniel.halloran@icann.org</a>>, Amy Stathos <<a href="mailto:amy.stathos@icann.org" target="_blank">amy.stathos@icann.org</a>>, "Boelter, Jessica C.K." <<a href="mailto:jboelter@sidley.com" target="_blank">jboelter@sidley.com</a>>, "Fuller, Miles" <<a href="mailto:wfuller@sidley.com" target="_blank">wfuller@sidley.com</a>>, "Tam, Tennie H." <<a href="mailto:tennie.tam@sidley.com" target="_blank">tennie.tam@sidley.com</a>><br><br><br>
<div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Dear Bylaws Coordination Group,</p><p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached a document \u2013 DRAFT NEW ICANN BYLAWS (vers.
2Apr) (\u201cDRAFT BYLAWS\u201d) for your review and discussion. As you will recall the
last full draft was provided to you on 18 March, with the promise to provide
another full turn of the DRAFT BYLAWS for your review today on 2 April.
The DRAFT BYLAWS attached is the current working draft among the legal
drafting group. There is also an Issue List attached, which are a set of additional questions and clarifications requested from the Bylaws Coordination Group.<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u>We ask that you share the attachments with your CCWG, ICG and CWG
colleagues who will be reviewing this during this critical work week</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><u>Recent Work</u></b> \u2013 During the past
two weeks the legal drafting group, made up of Sidley\u2019s team, Adler\u2019s team and
ICANN's Legal team reviewed and worked through mark ups and redrafts of the
various sections of new ICANN Bylaws. Also, we have held four separate
meetings with the Bylaws Coordination Group during this two-week period asking
questions and incorporating that feedback into the new draft. There is
likely to be the need for some additional discussions as we work toward a
public comment version of the new ICANN bylaws.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><u>More Work to Do</u></b> \u2013 There is still
work to do on the DRAFT BYLAWS, in identifying and working through any
remaining provisions in the draft that are not clear, finding any remaining
open issues, improving the provisions, and polishing the draft before
publication for public comment. The legal teams remain engaged in review
mode and are available for questions and comments during this period.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><u>Legal Teams have
not yet \u201ccertified\u201d</u></b> \u2013 Since a) the Bylaws Coordination Group, CWG
and CCWG have not yet reviewed and reacted to these DRAFT BYLAWS, b) there are
still remaining open issues, and c) there is still review and polishing to be
done by the legal teams \u2013 the legal teams have not indicated yet that the
current DRAFT BYLAWS fully meets the recommendations within the Proposals.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">As we have indicated above there is still work to be done, including
receiving the feedback from those reviewing these DRAFT BYLAWS this week before
the legal teams will be in a position to certify the posting version for Public
Comment</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><u>Next Steps</u></b> \u2013</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">1) <i>Now until 13
April</i> \u2013 members of CCWG, CWG, Bylaws Coordination Group, Board and ICG to
complete review of these DRAFT BYLAWS and provide feedback to legal teams;</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">2) <i>Now until 18
April</i>, (with particular focus during week of 13-18 April) \u2013 legal teams to
update DRAFT BYLAWS working in coordination with the Bylaws Drafting Group;</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">3) <i>20 April</i> \u2013
posting date for public comment period for new proposed bylaws \u2013 with legal
teams supporting that the new proposed bylaws meets the proposal recommendations.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">\u2014\u2014\u2014</p><p class="MsoNormal">As before, we look forward to working with all of you in the coming
days, to get ICANN\u2019s Bylaws in the best form possible to effectuate these
important changes.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">We hope these views of the documents are useful and that you receive
them in the spirit that they are offered\u2026 to help all of us to be able to
collaborate and work through these Bylaws changes in the most effective way
possible \u2014 to enable the creation of a new and stronger, community empowered
ICANN.</p><p class="MsoNormal">John Jeffrey, Holly Gregory, and Rosemary Fei</p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u><u></u></p></div></div><br><div>
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