<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000000; font-size:10pt;"><div>Alissa,</div><div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">I like this edit alot, and support this version.</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style=""><span style="">I</span><span style=""> also support Jean-Jacques last suggestion re rewording a sentence: </span><span style="">"the ICG expects that the ICANN Board will send the report to NTIA within 14 days of receiving the proposal, without making any changes (...)",</span></div><div style=""><span style=""><br style=""></span></div><div style=""><span style="">Best,</span></div><div style=""><span style="">Lynn</span></div></div><blockquote id="replyBlockquote" webmail="1" style="border-left: 2px solid blue; margin-left: 8px; padding-left: 8px; font-size:10pt; color:black; font-family:verdana;" mce_style="border-left: 2px solid blue; margin-left: 8px; padding-left: 8px; font-size:10pt; color:black; font-family:verdana;"> <div id="wmQuoteWrapper"> -------- Original Message --------<br> Subject: [Internal-cg] IANA-transition-proposal-v10-MI-JA-AC<br> From: Alissa Cooper <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>><br> Date: Wed, March 02, 2016 10:41 am<br> To: IANA etc etcCoordination Group <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>><br> <br> Version attached incorporates edits from Manal and Joe, with minor wordsmithing from me in paras X029 and 112. The paragraphs now read:<br> <br> "The ICG unanimously supports this proposal and recommends that all affected parties implement it. The ICG affirms that this proposal and all the related processes have met the criteria laid out in our charter and mandate, including the NTIA criteria, and on this basis we transmit this proposal to NTIA via the ICANN Board.\u201d<br> <br> Dropbox:<br> <a target="_blank" href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/k5zo7cliaxt010p/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-MI-JA-AC.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/k5zo7cliaxt010p/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-MI-JA-AC.docx?dl=0</a><br> <a target="_blank" href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/pvjozgwmqkp492o/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-MI-JA-AC-clean.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/pvjozgwmqkp492o/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-MI-JA-AC-clean.docx?dl=0</a><br> <br> This is the final version that we will forward to the Board/NTIA on March 10 if all goes well.<br> <br> Alissa<br> <br> <br> <hr>_______________________________________________<br> Internal-cg mailing list<br> <a target="_blank" href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a><br> <a target="_blank" href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a><br> </div> </blockquote></span></body></html>