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Colleagues:<br>
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should the latter point be phrased: <br>
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With the confirmation of the all the Operational Communities that no
further dependencies need to be addressed, ICG affirms that it has
found that the combined proposals and all the related processes have
met the criteria laid out in our charter and mandate, including the
relevant NTIA criteria, and on this basis we transmit this proposal
to the ICANN Board for submission to NTIA. <br>
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I don't like the construction of "we approved"... <br>
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Joe<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 3/1/2016 1:29 AM, Manal Ismail
wrote:<br>
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<div>Many thanks Alissa for sharing this version in advance of
the call .. All looks good to me ..</div>
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<div>I did 2 minor edits but have no strong position on any of
them .. Edits are attached in track changes, available on
Dropbox and underlined below for everyone's convenience:</div>
<div></div>
<div>Para X018 -> now X016:</div>
<div>Many commenters in the public comment period noted the CWG
dependency on ICANN-level accountability mechanisms that were,
at the time of the public comment period, under development in
the CCWG and <u>noted</u> the associated difficulty in
judging the
overall accountability provided by the Names proposal.</div>
<div>Rationale: this part of the sentence is now too far and I
think we need to link it back to what the commenters 'noted'.
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<div>Paras 112 and X031 -> now X029: </div>
<div>"The ICG unanimously supports this proposal and recommends
that all affected parties implement it. <u>The ICG approved
this version and agreed to submitting it to NTIA via the
ICANN Board.</u>"</div>
<div>Rationale: this was mentioned somewhere in the deleted text
.. I feel it's worth mentioning .. not necessarily here if
there's a better place .. </div>
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<div>Looking forward to our call later today ..</div>
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<div>Kind Regards</div>
<div>--Manal</div>
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From: Internal-cg [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper<br>
Sent: Monday, February 29, 2016 6:48 PM<br>
To: IANA etc etcCoordination Group<br>
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<div>Dear all,</div>
<div></div>
<div>We have received confirmation from the CWG that the CCWG
proposal meets its requirements. Therefore, we are now in a
position to approve our final proposal for transmission to
NTIA via the ICANN Board. The final proposal, with edits made
to the sections
that previously referenced the CWG-CCWG dependency, is
attached to this message in redline and clean form. They are
also available on Dropbox:</div>
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<div><a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/0lzepe727bxqz20/IANA-transition-proposal-v10.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/0lzepe727bxqz20/IANA-transition-proposal-v10.docx?dl=0</a></div>
<div><a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/j65tohvyy59ellt/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-clean.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/j65tohvyy59ellt/IANA-transition-proposal-v10-clean.docx?dl=0</a></div>
<div></div>
<div>We will ask for the ICGs approval of this final version on
our March 1 call (12:00 UTC). Here is the proposed agenda for
the call:</div>
<div></div>
<div>1. Approval of final transition proposal 2. Update on
communications plans</div>
<div></div>
<div>Feedback on the agenda is welcome.</div>
<div></div>
<div>Alissa</div>
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