<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Perhaps to Milton's point, which I think is valid, we could say something like:</div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br></div><div id="AppleMailSignature">stakeholder communities have been satisfied with the current operations of IANA and have strived in this process to assure that they can have similar confidence in the transitioned systems? I think we need to avoid the impression that nothing has changed, but should also highlight the continued consistency. I'm not comfortable that I have captured it, but I don't think the current draft captured it either...</div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br></div><div id="AppleMailSignature">Joe<br><br>Sent from my iPad</div><div><br>On Oct 28, 2015, at 4:00 PM, WUKnoben <<a href="mailto:wolf-ulrich.knoben@t-online.de">wolf-ulrich.knoben@t-online.de</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
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<div>Re para 98 I could agree with Milton.</div>
<div>Reading para X028, I don\u2019t get tempted of this kind of interpretation. The
text just says that the communities satisfaction with the IANA performance will
not be impacted \u2013 which to my knowledge is intended.</div>
<div><br>Wolf-Ulrich<br><br></div>
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<div style="font-color: black"><b>From:</b> <a title="milton@gatech.edu" href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu">Mueller, Milton L</a> </div>
<div><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 27, 2015 4:43 PM</div>
<div><b>To:</b> <a title="alissa@cooperw.in" href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</a> ; <a title="internal-cg@ianacg.org" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">IANA etc etc
Coordination Group</a> </div>
<div><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Proposal for final
review</div></div></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">All:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">I
went through this document as quickly as I could. It\u2019s in great shape overall. I
made some minor edits to the clean version in the attached draft, with tracking
turned on. There are a couple of substantive changes I propose which I will
discuss here: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">Para
X028 currently says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">\u201cAll
three communities determined that the global customers and partners of the IANA
services and their communities of stakeholders are presently satisfied with the
performance of the IANA functions by the IANA department of ICANN. The combined
proposal is not expected to impact that.\u201d<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">This
gives I think the (false) impression that the proposal just keeps everything the
same and the customers didn\u2019t want any change. However, all 3 communities also
made it clear that they want to be able to choose (or continue to choose) a
different IFO should the need arise, a capability which does _<i>not</i>_
currently exist for numbers and names, but which is created by this proposal.
Also if the customers wanted no change then why did the proposal create
PTI?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">So on
p. 28-9, paragraph 98 I edited the end of paragraph 98 to
read:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">98
All three communities determined that the global customers and partners of the
IANA services, including the gTLD and ccTLD registries and their communities of
stakeholders; the RIRs; and the IETF are presently satisfied with the
performance of the IANA functions by the IANA department of ICANN. The combined
proposal is structured such that the PTI will continue to provide the IANA
functions to its global customers and partners post-transition in essentially
the same manner as ICANN\u2019s IANA department does today. In the names community,
IANA customers expressed support for a clearer separation between ICANN as
policy developer and IANA as implementer, and the PTI separation accomplishes
this. Also, the proposal makes it possible for each operational community to
choose a different IFO should the need arise, a capability which does not
currently exist for numbers and names. Thus the needs and expectations of the
global customers and partners should continue to be satisfied after the
transition.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">Also,
on p. 30, para 108 implementation list I believe we need to
add:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif; COLOR: #1f497d">\u2022
Transfer of the IANA-related intellectual property and domain names to the
entity.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri",sans-serif"> Internal-cg
[<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Alissa
Cooper<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 26, 2015 1:19 PM<br><b>To:</b> IANA etc
etc Coordination Group<br><b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] Proposal for final
review<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the
proposal reflected all changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing
and footnote numbering issues to be worked out once the secretariat produces the
PDF but otherwise this is the version intended for publication with our agreed
status update announcement on October 29.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">If you see any errors in this version, please make them known
on the mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28. <o:p></o:p></p></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Alissa<o:p></o:p></p></div>
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