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<DIV>Thanks Alissa,</DIV>
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<DIV>my comments re the clean version:</DIV>
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<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">1. on the
front page I\u2019d like to suggest to write the full name of the CWG as it\u2019s done
with all the other acronyms (e.g. ICG and CCWG).</DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">2.
shouldn\u2019t there be given a hint that text with yellow background is expected to
be replaced/removed after the CWG dependency is disappeared?</DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">3. page 6,
X018, penultimate line: \u201c...ICG will <U>secure</U> confirmation...\u201d.</DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">4. page 20,
51: same as 3.</DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">5. page 23,
65: same as 3.</DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">6. Coming
back to my earlier question re the IANAPLAN proposal (ICG para 3004): \u201c<SPAN
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July 10, 2015\u201d is confusing</FONT></FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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face=Helvetica></FONT></SPAN><BR>Best regards<BR><BR>Wolf-Ulrich<BR><BR></DIV>
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<DIV style="font-color: black"><B>From:</B> <A title=alissa@cooperw.in
href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Sent:</B> Monday, October 26, 2015 6:18 PM</DIV>
<DIV><B>To:</B> <A title=internal-cg@ianacg.org
href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">IANA etc etc Coordination Group</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Subject:</B> [Internal-cg] Proposal for final review</DIV></DIV></DIV>
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style='FONT-SIZE: small; TEXT-DECORATION: none; FONT-FAMILY: "Calibri"; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; COLOR: #000000; FONT-STYLE: normal; DISPLAY: inline'>Please
find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal reflected all changes
agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing and footnote numbering issues
to be worked out once the secretariat produces the PDF but otherwise this is the
version intended for publication with our agreed status update announcement on
October 29.
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<DIV>If you see any errors in this version, please make them known on the
mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28. </DIV>
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<DIV>Thanks,</DIV>
<DIV>Alissa</DIV>
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<DIV>Dropbox:</DIV>
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href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0</A></DIV>
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href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0</A></DIV>
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Please find attached a redlined and clean copy of the proposal reflected all
changes agreed at the F2F. There are still a few spacing and footnote numbering
issues to be worked out once the secretariat produces the PDF but otherwise this
is the version intended for publication with our agreed status update
announcement on October 29.<BR><BR>If you see any errors in this version, please
make them known on the mailing list by 23:59 UTC on October 28.
<BR><BR>Thanks,<BR>Alissa<BR><BR>Dropbox:<BR>https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0
<https://www.dropbox.com/s/yhvx3pl8hx2oju0/IANA-transition-proposal-v8.docx?dl=0><BR>https://www.dropbox.com/s/pj6s0igu8s8k4tq/IANA-transition-proposal-v8-clean.docx?dl=0
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