<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">Hi Elise,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">The text in the executive summary is the same as the text in Part 0, Section IV.B, where we describe the PTI. I dont think we need to repeat it twice in Part 0.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks,</div><div class="">Alissa</div><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Oct 22, 2015, at 8:11 AM, Elise Gerich <<a href="mailto:elise.gerich@icann.org" class="">elise.gerich@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class="">Alissa,</div><div class="">Thanks for pointing out the confirmations from the other two communities. Given those confirmations, is there a reason that this is stated as a requirement of the three proposals in the Executive Summary instead of brought up in the Compatibility and interoperability section with some language such as has been drafted to describe the compatibility of the IPR issue which was also proposed explicitly by a single Operational Community?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks,</div><div class=""><div class="">-- Elise </div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" class=""><div style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt; text-align: left; border-width: 1pt medium medium; border-style: solid none none; padding: 3pt 0in 0in; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223);" class=""><span style="font-weight:bold" class="">From: </span> Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" class="">alissa@cooperw.in</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight:bold" class="">Date: </span> Thursday, October 22, 2015 at 7:16 AM<br class=""><span style="font-weight:bold" class="">To: </span> Elise Gerich <<a href="mailto:elise.gerich@icann.org" class="">elise.gerich@icann.org</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight:bold" class="">Cc: </span> Russ Mundy <<a href="mailto:mundy@tislabs.com" class="">mundy@tislabs.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" class="">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" class="">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight:bold" class="">Subject: </span> Re: [Internal-cg] transition proposal v5<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="BORDER-LEFT: #b5c4df 5 solid; PADDING:0 0 0 5; MARGIN:0 0 0 5;" class="" type="cite"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">Hi Elise,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">We have had multiple confirmations from the other two communities that this approach is acceptable to them, in the public comments and elsewhere. It isnt documented in the OC proposals because they were submitted before the PTI concept was invented.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Alissa</div><br class=""><div class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Oct 22, 2015, at 6:23 AM, Elise Gerich <<a href="mailto:elise.gerich@icann.org" class="">elise.gerich@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><div class="">In paragraph X009 the version of the executive summary in Russ email states:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote style="margin: 0px 0px 0px 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class="" type="cite"><div class="">Under the combined transition proposal the administrative staff and related resources, processes, data, and know-how associated with all of the IANA functions currently covered by the NTIA contract would be legally transferred to PTI. ICANN
would contract with the PTI for the performance of the naming functions."</div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Did I miss something in the protocol parameters and numbers communities proposals? From my reading of their proposals as well as the summary in paragraphs X007 and X008, neither of those communities proposed that the administrative staff, etc.
would be legally transferred to PTI. I agree this is a pragmatic implementation approach, it is just that I do not see that approach documented in the numbers and protocol parameters proposals. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Is this an ICG interpretation of what should happen rather than what is specified in the two individual proposals?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">-- Elise </div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div></div><div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br class=""></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><div style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt; text-align: left; border-width: 1pt medium medium; border-style: solid none none; padding: 3pt 0in 0in; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223);" class=""><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="">From:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>Internal-cg <<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org" class="">internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>> on behalf of Russ Mundy <<a href="mailto:mundy@tislabs.com" class="">mundy@tislabs.com</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="">Date:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>Thursday, October 22, 2015 at 1:26 AM<br class=""><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="">To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>"<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" class="">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" class="">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="">Cc:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>Russ Mundy <<a href="mailto:mundy@tislabs.com" class="">mundy@tislabs.com</a>><br class=""><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="">Subject:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span>Re: [Internal-cg] transition proposal v5<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="border-left-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-left-width: 5px; border-left-style: solid; padding: 0px 0px 0px 5px; margin: 0px 0px 0px 5px;" class="" type="cite"><div class=""><div class=""><div class="">Ive also carefully read the executive summary and the (relatively) new History of IANA section (paras 02-06).</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I like the changes Daniel suggestions to the exec summary and dont have any further changes to suggest.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In the History section, Ive made several readability changes in paragraphs 04 & 05 that I think make them clearer. If others disagree with the changes, Im not wedded to these words so they can be further improved or reverted if the group would
prefers.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I did spot one small factual error in the History section that I think Ive corrected, i.e., the contract that was awarded in 2000 is not the one being replaced by this transition, rather, it is the contract that was awarded 2 Jul 2012 - I think
that adding a subsequent to line 9 of 04 corrects the error.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Ive placed a version titled: IANA-transition-proposal-v5-karrenberg-mundy.docx in Dropbox.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">RussM</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">On Oct 21, 2015, at 12:08 PM, Daniel Karrenberg <<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" class="">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>> wrote:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="border-left-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-left-width: 5px; border-left-style: solid; padding: 0px 0px 0px 5px; margin: 0px 0px 0px 5px;" class="" type="cite"><div class="">Signed PGP part</div><div class="">I have read the executive summary carefully and suggest two minor</div><div class="">edits dropping text. If they are not easily agreed, drop them and move o</div><div class="">n.</div><div class=""></div><div class=""><a href="https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/Combined%20Proposal?previ" class="">https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/Combined%20Proposal?previ</a></div><div class="">ew=IANA-transition-proposal-v5-karrenberg.docx</div><div class=""></div><div class="">I also suggest a *major* edit to the final paragraphs, the "ICG</div><div class="">Recommendations." This is the most important part of the executive</div><div class="">summary and need to be a strong and clear statement. I believe we</div><div class="">deserve better than we have now and suggest we say just this:</div><div class=""></div><div class="">X031<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>
The ICG unanimously supports this proposal and recommends to all</div><div class="">parties to implement it.</div><div class=""></div><div class="">X032<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>
The ICG will transmit this proposal to the ICANN board for</div><div class="">submission to NTIA as soon as the CWG has confirmed that its</div><div class="">requirements regarding ICANN accountability have been met..</div><div class=""></div><div class=""></div><div class="">Daniel</div><div class=""></div><div class="">On 20.10.15 23:28 , Patrik Fltstrm wrote:</div><div class="">> I walked through the History Section to clean up the language a</div><div class="">> bit.</div><div class="">></div><div class="">> The -v5 now has red-line that marks my changes.</div><div class="">></div><div class="">> paf</div><div class="">></div><div class="">> On 20 Oct 2015, at 17:07, Alissa Cooper wrote:</div><div class="">></div><div class="">>> Updated proposal attached. Dropbox:</div><div class="">>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/pjchlea1b0ammd0/IANA-transition-proposal-v5" class="">https://www.dropbox.com/s/pjchlea1b0ammd0/IANA-transition-proposal-v5</a></div><div class="">.docx?dl=0</div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>></div><div class=""><<a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/pjchlea1b0ammd0/IANA-transition-proposal-v" class="">https://www.dropbox.com/s/pjchlea1b0ammd0/IANA-transition-proposal-v</a></div><div class="">5.docx?dl=0></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">Edits made:</div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>> - Deleted mentions of public comments from exec summary (except</div><div class="">>> the two people wanted to retain) - Edited and aligned all</div><div class="">>> references to CCWG dependency (per email thread started by</div><div class="">>> Daniel) - Added history section starting with paragraph 02 (per</div><div class="">>> Patrik) - Updated Figure 4 pie chart to reflect correct</div><div class="">>> statistics (per Lynn) - Edited implementation bullet item</div><div class="">>> related to issue resolution mechanisms (per Martin)</div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>> Alissa</div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>> _______________________________________________ Internal-cg</div><div class="">>> mailing list<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org" class="">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a></div><div class="">>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org" class="">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>></div><div class="">>> _______________________________________________ Internal-cg</div><div class="">>> mailing list<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org" class="">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a></div><div class="">>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org" class="">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a></div><div class=""></div><div class=""></div><div class="">_______________________________________________</div><div class="">Internal-cg mailing list</div><div class=""><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org" class="">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a></div><div class=""><a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org" class="">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div></div></blockquote></span><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">_______________________________________________</span><br style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Internal-cg
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