<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class=""></div><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Oct 9, 2015, at 3:38 PM, Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" class="">alissa@cooperw.in</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Based on the responses to the questions we posed to the OCs and our discussion on the call yesterday, I\u2019ve made the associated changes to the proposal text, part 0 and part 1. I also did a bit of an editing pass, incorporated the edits from Paul (with slight tweaks for consistency in some cases), incorporated a pared-down version of the implementation list from Lynn, and tried to have the executive summary reflect the updates. I\u2019ve also highlighted in yellow all the places where we talk about the CCWG dependency. Once we finalize the rest of the text those will be the only bits we may need to edit in the future once the CCWG work wraps up.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">There is one outstanding substantive issue relating to the RZM text in paras 85-88. For now I incorporated into Milton\u2019s text the text I had suggested on the list, but we need to make sure that is what we want to say or say something else (or wait and follow up with some other entity), and we need to figure out a resolution to the issue about the separation of the IFO and RZM roles.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I did not put in anything about \u201chow the OCs collaborate\u201d as Lynn said work was ongoing on that.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Please have a look at this version and send feedback to the list if you have any.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks,</div><div class="">Alissa</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Dropbox: <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/x2nbnucfpo257kj/IANA-transition-proposal-v3.docx?dl=0" class="">https://www.dropbox.com/s/x2nbnucfpo257kj/IANA-transition-proposal-v3.docx?dl=0</a></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""></div></div><span id="cid:6FEA5A01-0210-4CD5-924E-231D2B0417C0@cisco.com"><IANA-transition-proposal-v3.docx></span><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class=""></div></div>_______________________________________________<br class="">Internal-cg mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org" class="">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a><br class="">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org<br class=""></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></body></html>