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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Joe,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I would like to suggest some improvements in the paragraph on the NTIA criterion pertaining to governments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">You wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">A range of comments addressed the role of governments. Among the most relevant: a couple felt that government roles would be too constrained and they would not be able to fulfill all of the criteria of the Tunis Agenda;
<span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">a couple also highlighted a concern for the possible role future legislation by US government based on concern of jurisdiction</span>; and
<span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">more commentators focused on what they perceived to be a possible enhanced voting role for the GAC and concerns of governments as owners of ccTLDs in the CSC</span>. The proposal cannot address all hypothetical
situations and has relied on the community processes to find the right balance across the stakeholder equities and operational requirements. The ICG sees no further action as appropriate at this point, but notes the concerns raised.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="color:windowtext">I would propose to replace this paragraph with the following
statement:<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="color:windowtext">The overwhelming majority of comments agreed that the
proposal does not replace NTIA stewardship with a government-led or intergovernmental solution. Some comments felt that governmental roles would be too constrained; others felt that the role of the U.S. government was still too strong due to the retention
of U.S. jurisdiction. A few other commentators expressed concerns about the role of government-controlled ccTLDs in the CSC.
</span></span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="color:windowtext">The ICG notes the concerns raised, but believes that the proposal
has relied on the community processes to find the right balance across the stakeholder equities and operational requirements, and thus sees no further action as needed.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="color:windowtext">A small number of comments expressed concern about
</span></span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="color:windowtext">the strengthening of the GAC in the new accountability arrangements.
The ICG notes that insofar as they justify changes in the proposal, these comments are best addressed by the CCWG on enhanced accountability.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext"> Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Jennifer Chung<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 25, 2015 1:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> internal-cg@ianacg.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] FW: Please find attached revised summary proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">FYI please see the email from Joe below with the attached proposed text.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext"> joseph alhadeff [<a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 25, 2015 1:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Jennifer Chung <<a href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia">jen@icgsec.asia</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Fwd: Please find attached revised summary proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">FYI<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Tue, 22 Sep 2015 09:49:09 -0400<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">joseph alhadeff <a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</a>
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<pre>Please note that I found no cross reference in our proposal to the role <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>of government as multistakeholder participant that would address the <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>concern raised that such participation may bee seen as at odds with the <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>NTIA criteria. I have tried to raise an innocuous addition as a <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>footnote to deal with the concern in a neutral fashion. I have <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>highlighted it in red to facilitate ease of comment. Those topics <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>highlighted in yellow are possible places where other more specific work <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>may supersede this language and be replaced by a cross reference. There <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>is one margin question as well.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Thanks.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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