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Milton:<br>
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I am fine with the suggestion, if others are OK.. Recall that they
yellow was to see if there was a needed cross reference to other
sections that might address the issue more fully. I recall that a
question had been raised at the meeting, perhaps by Kavouss,
questioning the assertion related to voting in the CSC being a real
issue due to issues being resolved in parallel workstreams...<br>
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Joe <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 9/26/2015 11:14 AM, Mueller, Milton
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I
would like to suggest some improvements in the paragraph on
the NTIA criterion pertaining to governments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A range of comments addressed the role of
governments. Among the most relevant: a couple felt that
government roles would be too constrained and they would not
be able to fulfill all of the criteria of the Tunis Agenda;
<span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">a couple
also highlighted a concern for the possible role future
legislation by US government based on concern of
jurisdiction</span>; and
<span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">more
commentators focused on what they perceived to be a possible
enhanced voting role for the GAC and concerns of governments
as owners of ccTLDs in the CSC</span>. The proposal cannot
address all hypothetical situations and has relied on the
community processes to find the right balance across the
stakeholder equities and operational requirements. The ICG
sees no further action as appropriate at this point, but notes
the concerns raised.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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style="color:windowtext">I would propose to replace this
paragraph with the following statement:<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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style="color:windowtext">The overwhelming majority of
comments agreed that the proposal does not replace NTIA
stewardship with a government-led or intergovernmental
solution. Some comments felt that governmental roles would
be too constrained; others felt that the role of the U.S.
government was still too strong due to the retention of
U.S. jurisdiction. A few other commentators expressed
concerns about the role of government-controlled ccTLDs in
the CSC.
</span></span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span
style="color:windowtext">The ICG notes the concerns
raised, but believes that the proposal has relied on the
community processes to find the right balance across the
stakeholder equities and operational requirements, and
thus sees no further action as needed.
<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span
style="color:windowtext">A small number of comments
expressed concern about
</span></span><span
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style="color:windowtext">the strengthening of the GAC in
the new accountability arrangements. The ICG notes that
insofar as they justify changes in the proposal, these
comments are best addressed by the CCWG on enhanced
accountability.
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Internal-cg [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Jennifer Chung<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 25, 2015 1:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] FW: Please find attached
revised summary proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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please see the email from Joe below with the attached
proposed text.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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joseph alhadeff [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 25, 2015 1:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Jennifer Chung <<a
moz-do-not-send="true" href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia">jen@icgsec.asia</a></a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Fwd: Please find attached revised
summary proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">FYI<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached revised
summary proposal<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Tue, 22 Sep 2015 09:49:09 -0400<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">joseph alhadeff <a
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<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com"><joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com></a></a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<pre>Please note that I found no cross reference in our proposal to the role <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>of government as multistakeholder participant that would address the <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>concern raised that such participation may bee seen as at odds with the <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>NTIA criteria. I have tried to raise an innocuous addition as a <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>footnote to deal with the concern in a neutral fashion. I have <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>highlighted it in red to facilitate ease of comment. Those topics <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>highlighted in yellow are possible places where other more specific work <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>may supersede this language and be replaced by a cross reference. There <o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>is one margin question as well.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Thanks.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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