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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body bgcolor=white lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>FYI please see the email from Joe below with the attached proposed text.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></a></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext'> joseph alhadeff [mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com] <br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 25, 2015 1:47 PM<br><b>To:</b> Jennifer Chung <jen@icgsec.asia><br><b>Subject:</b> Fwd: Please find attached revised summary proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>FYI<br><br>-------- Forwarded Message -------- <o:p></o:p></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td nowrap valign=top style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><b>Subject: <o:p></o:p></b></p></td><td style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal>Please find attached revised summary proposal<o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td nowrap valign=top style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><b>Date: <o:p></o:p></b></p></td><td style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal>Tue, 22 Sep 2015 09:49:09 -0400<o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td nowrap valign=top style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><b>From: <o:p></o:p></b></p></td><td style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal>joseph alhadeff <a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com"><joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com></a><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td nowrap valign=top style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><b>Organization: <o:p></o:p></b></p></td><td style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal>Oracle Corporation<o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td nowrap valign=top style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><b>To: <o:p></o:p></b></p></td><td style='padding:0in 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</a> <a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org"><internal-cg@icann.org></a><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr></table><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></p><pre>Please note that I found no cross reference in our proposal to the role <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>of government as multistakeholder participant that would address the <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>concern raised that such participation may bee seen as at odds with the <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>NTIA criteria.� I have tried to raise an innocuous addition as a <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>footnote to deal with the concern in a neutral fashion.� I have <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>highlighted it in red to facilitate ease of comment.� Those topics <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>highlighted in yellow are possible places where other more specific work <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>may supersede this language and be replaced by a cross reference.� There <o:p></o:p></pre><pre>is one margin question as well.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Thanks.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>