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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Internal-cg [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Alissa Cooper<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 3, 2015 11:02 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> IANA etc etc Coordination Group <internal-cg@ianacg.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] Fwd: [CWG-Stewardship] Comments from Richard Hill<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">See the mail from Jonathan below. I’ve quoted below the analysis we previously wrote up but did not send to the CWG. Any objections to sending this back in response to Jonathan’s request?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Regarding Richard's claim about the final proposal not having gone out for public comment, in our view what he suggests could yield a process that never ends, given that further comments can always be provided whenever a document is put
out for public comment. Thus requiring a “final” document to be put out for public comment is an unreasonable requirement for a process intended to terminate.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Regarding his claim about the global multistakeholder community, our understanding of the CWG’s charter is that the group is open to any interested participant.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Regarding his claim about his specific comments on the proposal, we note that the CWG proposal states on p. 51 that "The final proposal has received the consensus support of the CWG-Stewardship with no objections or minority statements
recorded for Chartering Organization consideration.” We note that rationales were given and CWG consensus positions explained for each comment received during the public comment period that was not included in the proposal (including Richard’s).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Alissa<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">From: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">"Jonathan Robinson" <<a href="mailto:jrobinson@afilias.info">jrobinson@afilias.info</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">Subject: RE: [CWG-Stewardship] Comments from Richard Hill</span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">Date: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">July 28, 2015 at 2:54:54 AM PDT</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">To: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">"'Alissa Cooper'" <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>>, <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">Cc: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif">"'Jonathan Robinson'" <<a href="mailto:jonathan.robinson@ipracon.com">jonathan.robinson@ipracon.com</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-IE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thank-you for this, please do go ahead and send the ICG thoughts on this through to the CWG.</span><span lang="EN-IE"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> </span></span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Alissa
Cooper [<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in"><span style="color:purple">mailto:alissa@cooperw.in</span></a>]<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
<b>Sent:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>27 July 2015 16:39<br>
<b>To:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><span style="color:purple">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>IANA <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><span style="color:purple">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>[CWG-Stewardship] Comments from Richard Hill</span><span lang="EN-IE"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-IE">The ICG has received the following from Richard Hill: <<a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/pipermail/icg-forum_ianacg.org/2015-June/000001.html"><span style="color:purple">http://mm.ianacg.org/pipermail/icg-forum_ianacg.org/2015-June/000001.html</span></a>>
According to the process the ICG uses to handle forum comments <<a href="https://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/documents/Community-Comments-Handling-1May15-final.pdf"><span style="color:purple">https://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/documents/Community-Comments-Handling-1May15-final.pdf</span></a>>,
the ICG assesses whether the comments are to be investigated by the operational community itself, and if we draw that conclusion we make the OC aware of the comment and ask whether the OC has any input. So we would appreciate input you may have no later than
August 10.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-IE">The ICG has also reviewed these questions in light of the CWG charter and process, and we would be happy to send our thoughts if helpful to the CWG.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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