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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Fine by me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Alissa Cooper [mailto:alissa@cooperw.in]
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<b>Sent:</b> 30 July 2015 15:13<br>
<b>To:</b> Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Russ Mundy; Jennifer Chung; IANA etc etc Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Proposal - 24 hrs review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">All,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have incorporated changes based on feedback from Wolf-Ulrich, Joe, and Martin. The text of -v9 (attached) should now be considered final as we have shipped it off to the translators.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">X005 (same as 07 below): added \u201c(subsidiary)\u201d<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">X012 (same as 32 below): parenthetical now reads \u201c(estimated to occur prior to ICANN 54 in October 2015)\u201d<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">X018 (same as 45): the text now reads:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="xexecutivesummarybodyparanumber"><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span><span lang="EN-CA">The ICG will make a determination about whether the combined proposal has achieved broad community support following its solicitation of
public comments on the combined proposal.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">X021 (same as 51 below): this was clearly confusing to several people. the text now reads as follows:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="xexecutivesummarybodyparanumber"><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span><span lang="EN-CA">While the names proposal calls for the IANA functions operator to be transferred to the PTI, the PTI will be an affiliate (subsidiary) of
ICANN and ICANN will be responsible for the stewardship of the PTI. Hence operational roles are maintained. The proposal envisages the names aspect of the current NTIA oversight and contracting authority is transferred to ICANN. The separation of PTI as a
subsidiary will ensure the independence of that oversight role from the contractor providing the service. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">X026 (similar to 63 below): this is a new paragraph in a new section to address Wolf-Ulrich\u2019s point. it reads:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="xexecutivesummarybodyparanumber"><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">After the conclusion of the ICG public comment period and the finalization of CCWG Workstream 1, the ICG will make a final determination
about whether to recommend that NTIA approve the transition proposal. Based on the outcome of the evaluation described in Part 0, Section IV below, the ICG is planning to recommend that NTIA approve the transition proposal, pending the resolution of the outstanding
items highlighted in that section.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">07: added "(subsidiary)\u201d<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">09: no change. \u201cexpressly conditioned\u201d is text directly from the CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">32: parenthetical now reads \u201c(estimated to occur prior to ICANN 54 in October 2015)\u201d<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt">01</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span>While the names proposal calls for the IANA functions operator to be transferred to the PTI, the PTI will be an affiliate (subsidiary) of ICANN and ICANN will be responsible
for the stewardship of the PTI. Hence operational roles are maintained. The proposal envisages the names aspect of the current NTIA oversight and contracting authority is transferred to ICANN. The separation of PTI as a subsidiary will ensure the independence
of that oversight role from the contractor providing the service. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">63: this is a new paragraph in a new section to address Wolf-Ulrich\u2019s point. it reads:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt">01</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span>After the conclusion of the ICG public comment period and the finalization of CCWG Workstream 1, the ICG will make a final determination about whether to recommend that
NTIA approve the transition proposal. Based on the outcome of the evaluation described above, the ICG is planning to recommend that NTIA approve the transition proposal, pending the resolution of the outstanding items highlighted in this section.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Alissa<o:p></o:p></p>
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