<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif;font-size:16px"><div>Thank you Manal, Alissa Secretariat and Colleagues for the good and hard work in producing the documents.</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_143876"><br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_132959">I have just a small edit on the question 4. (Tasks)</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_136579">Can we change sub 1 and 2 under task 1 to read</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_143877" dir="ltr">1.a soliciting proposal..........................</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_143875" dir="ltr">1.b soliciting input ........................</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_143874" dir="ltr">If I am late, please ignore</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_143883" dir="ltr">Question 19 seems a bit confusing in terms of which target date we are referring to - ICG, Fadi's or proposed extension of IANA contract by NTIA - <br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_174061" dir="ltr">However, if I am late in raising this, please ignore also, as I can live with it.</div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_181369" dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">See attached.</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_181370" dir="ltr">Mary Uduma<br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_174091" dir="ltr"><br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_175485" dir="ltr"><br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_174063" dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1438229801100_132958"><span></span></div> <br><div class="qtdSeparateBR"><br><br></div><div style="display: block;" class="yahoo_quoted"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"> <div dir="ltr"> <font face="Arial" size="2"> On Thursday, July 30, 2015 6:51 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com> wrote:<br> </font> </div> <br><br> <div class="y_msg_container">Colleagues:<br clear="none"><br clear="none">In phrasing we should be careful not to imply that there is one overall <br clear="none">oversight model. there are rather oversight models of the substantive <br clear="none">parts, which in reality is today's reality as well.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">Joe<br clear="none"><br clear="none">On 7/29/2015 9:05 PM, Manal Ismail wrote:<br clear="none">> Many thanks Alissa for your comments ..<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> All ..<br clear="none">> On a second reading, I suggest adding a question before 21 stating: How does the overall oversight model of the combined proposal look like? (or something along the lines); and provide the modified overall diagram as an answer to this .. Does this make sense?<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> I suggest this question (20') to be inserted under section VII " About ICG combined proposal public comment period" after renaming it to either:<br clear="none">> - About ICG combined proposal<br clear="none">> or<br clear="none">> - About ICG combined proposal and the public comment period<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> Thoughts ?<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> I just didn't want to introduce a question that would affect the numbering of the working version at hand ..<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> Kind Regards<br clear="none">> --Manal<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> -----Original Message-----<br clear="none">> From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:<a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>]<br clear="none">> Sent: Thursday, July 30, 2015 2:22 AM<br clear="none">> To: Manal Ismail<br clear="none">> Cc: Russ Mundy; Yannis Li; <a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a><br clear="none">> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Final Published Version of FAQ (.doc & .rtf)<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> Hi Manal,<br clear="none">><br clear="none">> Some edits are attached. 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