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In the second paragraph we ask people to "provide opinions" are we
seeking comments or opinions or both? By seeking opinions, a
failure of response could be interpreted as a lack of support,
whereas a failure of comments is usually interpreted as support.
Furthermore if someone has an issue it would be useful to know what
they would see as a resolution of the issue.<br>
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<pre wrap="">Hi Alissa,
I was just coming to the same position myself (trying to reflect the on-going changes to the Combined Proposal in this document was becoming quite a task).
As we have the document below (with all changes shown), I have just accepted all changes and also tried to respond to a few comments in the document. This hopefully makes the key portions and the overall direction more clear ahead of our call on Wednesday. We can add the final text once we agree on the final Combined Proposal.
Best,
Lynn
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On Jul 27, 2015, at 4:09 PM, Alissa Cooper <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in"><alissa@cooperw.in></a> wrote:
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<pre wrap="">I have a suggestion for how to proceed with this: I think we should focus on finalizing the executive summary for the proposal, and then just use the executive summary text for the Development Process and Proposal Summary sections of the public comment web site. That way we dont need to duplicate efforts editing both documents, at least for those sections.
Ive done a bit of editing in the attached, mostly editorial changes.
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On Jul 22, 2015, at 9:03 AM, Jennifer Chung <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia"><jen@icgsec.asia></a> wrote:
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<pre wrap="">Thank you Manal. I have also added an edit to the last section re
'Completed Community Public Comment Periods'.
All - the latest version is attached and in the Dropbox folder for your
review.
Dropbox link to v3-MI-JC: <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://icgsec.asia/1GCUB3w">http://icgsec.asia/1GCUB3w</a>
Dropbox folder: <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2">http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2</a>
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Best Regards,
Jennifer
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From: Manal Ismail [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg">mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg</a>]
Sent: Wednesday, July 22, 2015 9:27 AM
To: Jennifer Chung <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia"><jen@icgsec.asia></a>; 'Lynn St.Amour' <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:Lynn@LStAmour.org"><Lynn@LStAmour.org></a>;
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Subject: RE: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v3
Thanks Jennifer ..
Thanks Lynn ..
Please find attached and on Dropbox a few remarks marked in track changes ..
Kind Regards
--Manal
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From: Internal-cg [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of
Jennifer Chung
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 6:21 PM
To: 'Lynn St.Amour'; <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2
Hi All,
Please find the public comment web page v3 (final section links added,
public comment date inserted) attached and linked below:
Dropbox link to v3: <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://icgsec.asia/1RN2v60">http://icgsec.asia/1RN2v60</a>
All previous versions of this document have been preserved and moved to a
different Dropbox subfolder called 'Web page materials' (CoordinationGroup >
Web page materials): <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://icgsec.asia/1MFLRyE">http://icgsec.asia/1MFLRyE</a>
All the latest versions of all materials for the ICG public comment period
launch is available here for your review (CoordinationGroup > Public
Comment): <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2">http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2</a>
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Best Regards,
Jennifer
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From: Internal-cg [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of Lynn
St.Amour
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 11:45 AM
To: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] public comment web page v2
Hello everyone,
just trying to move this forward in our chair's absence.
Could the secretariat include relevant links (per the request below) and
ensure the latest is posted on dropbox.
ICG members, could we have any remaining comments on this by this Friday
24th July? I will then incorporate the feedback and turn it around for
final approval and posting.
Must all be DONE by July 29th for start of public comment period,
Best,
Lynn
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I've updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our
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<pre wrap="">discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial
work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from
the ICG report in the combined proposal.
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Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this
by
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<pre wrap="">July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.
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I'm hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of
incorporating
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<pre wrap="">feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly
tied up with IETF matters next week.
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Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final
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Thanks,
Alissa
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