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    colleagues:<br>
    <br>
    The executive summary was a cut and past of sections of the
    document; I was very concerned that all topics in the executive
    summary have been sourced from the document. If we make changes in
    the Executive Summary we should make sure that the underlying
    document reflects those changes as well.<br>
    <br>
    As to completeness we agrees that� if the Workstream 1 contingencies
    are carried out it would be considered complete.� Recall that they
    have provided all the elements requested - in theory complete, but
    not final because a number are subject to consistencies.<br>
    <br>
    Joe<br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/27/2015 3:38 PM, Alissa Cooper
      wrote:<br>
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      <div>Mary, all,</div>
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      <div>I\u2019ve done some editing on the executive summary. Most of it
        is editorial but one piece that struck me as missing was a
        summary of the proposals themselves. I took the summary text
        from Part 0 and tried to shrink it further and added it here.</div>
      <div><br>
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      <div>Per Manal\u2019s comments re comment process and timeline: I don\u2019t
        think either of those belong in the executive summary, nor in
        the ICG report. The public comment process instructions will all
        be on the public comment web site and I think it\u2019s useful to
        maintain the separation between the substantive content of the
        document and the instructions and extra material relating to the
        public comment process. As for the timeline information, we have
        communicated separately about that to NTIA and the public, so I
        don\u2019t see a need to re-hash it in the proposal or the executive
        summary. Readers should be focusing on the content of the
        document and the timeline material was primarily for the purpose
        of NTIA\u2019s decision regarding the contract extension, which is a
        separate issue.</div>
      <div><br>
      </div>
      <div>Responses to Mary\u2019s points are below.</div>
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        <div>On Jul 26, 2015, at 11:11 PM, Mary Uduma &lt;<a
            moz-do-not-send="true" href="mailto:mnuduma@yahoo.com">mnuduma@yahoo.com</a>&gt;
          wrote:</div>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_12597">Jennifer and
                All,</div>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_10010" dir="ltr">I
                wrote comments direct at the dropbox regarding the
                Executive summary. Pardon me if I did it wrongly.</div>
              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_10011" dir="ltr">Below
                are my comments and I hope it can still be taken into
                consideration.</div>
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                the names proposal is complete</div>
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                the...................., are concluded"</div>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_17416" dir="ltr">I am
                still struggling with this assertion� of conclusion by
                the ICG as there are some incomplete/outstanding issues
                in the names proposal.viz<span
                  class="Apple-converted-space">�</span><br>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_20582" dir="ltr">The
                CCWG work stream 1 ongoing process mentioned in the
                section<span class="Apple-converted-space">�</span><br>
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        <div>I thought we concluded this on the last call, just as it is
          in the document now \u2014 that we only consider the names proposal
          complete pending the completion of CCWG Workstream 1.</div>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_25050" dir="ltr">The
                CP-! issue Vs the Framework of Interpretation, RFC 1591
                on ccTLD</div>
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        <div>I thought we resolved this on the last call given that
          Keith raised this issue and seemed satisfied with the result.</div>
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                placehold regarding the<span
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        <div>This is an implementation issue and clearly labeled as such
          in the proposal. We cannot expect all implementation issues to
          be finished before we consider the proposal complete,
          otherwise we will never finish. Many of them cannot be
          finished until it is known whether the proposal is accepted by
          the USG (precisely why it is called a \u201cproposal\u201d I think).</div>
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                incomplete SLE, etc<br>
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        <div>This is also an implementation issue. All three of the
          communities are working on their service level agreements, but
          none of these are gating on the proposal going froward.</div>
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              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_25052" dir="ltr">Except
                I omitted some communications within the ICG, I feel the
                proposal is not complete without resolutions of these
                issues.</div>
              <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_34543" dir="ltr">I did
                suggest or asked if the paragraph could be reworded to
                "noting" instead of "concluded" since the ICG would
                still have to make a determination on the completeness
                of the names proposal after the CCWG work S1 is accepted
                by the names community. ("<b
                  id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_39644">At that point
                  the ICG will make a final determination as to whether
                  it considers the names proposal to be complete</b>\u201d)</div>
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        <div>I have made this edit in the attached.</div>
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                if the ICG had concluded that the proposal is complete
                inspite of the oustandings, the WS1 of the CCWG, kindly
                clarify.�<span class="Apple-converted-space">�</span><br>
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        <div>I thought this is what we concluded on the last call.</div>
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                  comment was on the workability section.</div>
                <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_39646">Does the ICG
                  not consider the layers of revews in the names
                  proposal and those of the other two proposals a
                  workability issue? I do see workability issue here and
                  would request� that this question be included in the
                  matrix of questions.<span
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                <div id="yui_3_16_0_1_1437972049038_51092">"How will the
                  layers or multiple reviews in the names proposal and
                  those in the other two communities' proposals inpact
                  on IFO's service delivery?</div>
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        <div>I thought we also concluded this on the last call, namely
          that the IANA department is already subject to multiple
          reviews from the different communities, so the proposed
          combination of reviews is something that the department is
          already accustomed to handling. I would expect as well that
          the division of labor within the department is such that
          handling the reviews is manageable (e.g., at the IETF the
          protocol parameters staff are the folks involved in the
          performance reviews and reporting and I wouldn\u2019t expect them
          to also be involved in the reviews for the other functions if
          they do not actually work on the other functions).</div>
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        <div>Thanks,</div>
        <div>Alissa</div>
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                                review in this Dropbox folder (which
                                also contains all the latest versions of
                                everything you need to review for the
                                upcoming public comment period).</span></div>
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                                      class="Apple-converted-space">�</span>joseph
                                    alhadeff [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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                                    <b>Sent:</b><span
                                      class="Apple-converted-space">�</span>Friday,
                                    July 24, 2015 9:30 AM<br>
                                    <b>To:</b><span
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                                    Chung &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                                      href="mailto:jen@icgsec.asia"
                                      style="color: purple;
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                                    'Manal Ismail' &lt;<a
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                                      href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg"
                                      style="color: purple;
                                      text-decoration: underline;">manal@tra.gov.eg</a>&gt;;
                                    'Lynn St.Amour' &lt;<a
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                                    <b>Subject:</b><span
                                      class="Apple-converted-space">�</span>Re:
                                    [Internal-cg] Latest version of the
                                    combined proposal - v5</span></div>
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                              style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size:
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                              serif;">Colleagues:<br>
                              <br>
                              I attach a proposed executive summary.� I
                              have drafted a slightly longer stand alone
                              version of the summary sourced from the
                              document.� It summarizes process and
                              conclusions. We may wish to add a closing
                              section as it seems to end abruptly?<br>
                              <br>
                              Happy for any thoughts.<br>
                              <br>
                              Jennifer, I'm running out to a meeting,
                              could you post the draft executive summary
                              to drop box?<br>
                              <br>
                              I also attach a first and incomplete draft
                              of what had been a more summarized
                              version, but think that the short version
                              may be best suited to public material or a
                              cover note.� I attach it to see if any
                              language could be useful elsewhere...<br>
                              <br>
                              Joe</div>
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                                Roman', serif;">On 7/23/2015 11:55 PM,
                                Jennifer Chung wrote:</div>
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                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Hi All,</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Attached and linked is v5-MI-LSA-PW-JC.� Dropbox link:</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"><a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://icgsec.asia/1JiezqA" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">http://icgsec.asia/1JiezqA</a> . This includes Paul's latest edits as well as</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">the requests from Manal below:</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">"maybe secretariat could kindly assist in inserting the suggested</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">link(s)/footnote(s) (criteria against which the ICG assessed the proposals,</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">individually and collectively) and graph (showing the % of IANA transactions</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">(for 2014) per area) .."</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Two points relating to Manal/Lynn's request:</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">1. I have linked to the published ICG proposal finalization process</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"><a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/iana-transition-assembly-finaliz" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/iana-transition-assembly-finaliz</a></pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">ation-24dec14-en.pdf.� We have not published the individual assessment word</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">template (<a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://icgsec.asia/1el3lEA" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">http://icgsec.asia/1el3lEA</a>) on the ICG web site - I can do so if</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">we want to link to this in the ICG report.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">2. The data for the chart inserted was taken from pg. 53 of the IANA</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">presentation linked here:</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"><a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="https://singapore52.icann.org/en/schedule/wed-iana/presentation-iana-departm" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">https://singapore52.icann.org/en/schedule/wed-iana/presentation-iana-departm</a></pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">ent-11feb15-en.pdf. Lynn/Manal/all, please let me know if this is that is</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">envisaged.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Lastly please note that the paragraph numbering is not correct in this file.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Once all the edits for the ICG report are in, the Secretariat will merge the</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">ICG report back into the correctly numbered v5.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">As always, the latest versions of all the public comment related documents</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">for your review is in this Dropbox folder: <a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2</a> </pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Please let me know if you have any questions.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Best Regards,</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Jennifer</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">-----Original Message-----</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">From: Internal-cg [<a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org" target="_blank" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of Manal</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Ismail</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Sent: Thursday, July 23, 2015 9:07 PM</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">To: Lynn St.Amour <a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:lynn@lstamour.org" target="_blank" href="mailto:lynn@lstamour.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">&lt;lynn@lstamour.org&gt;</a>; <a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" target="_blank" href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a></pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Many thanks Lynn for the suggested edits and for your comments ..</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Following your email, I would also urge colleagues to review and provide</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">feedback by Friday in order to meet our public comment period dates .. </pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Meanwhile, for the sake of time, maybe the secretariat could kindly assist</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">in inserting the suggested link(s)/footnote(s) (criteria against which the</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">ICG assessed the proposals, individually and collectively) and graph</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">(showing the % of IANA transactions (for 2014) per area) ..</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">I also believe we need to conclude on the order of the proposals .. Although</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">it is not a substantial change it would still require a thorough review and</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">several edits throughout the document (ICG report, sections' headers, ...)</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">..</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">I had a few questions throughout the report and hope colleagues would review</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">and provide further guidance ..</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Finally, some parts of the text (highlighted in blue to my best) reflect the</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">current status of the accountability proposal (ongoing discussions) which</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">won't be the case (accountability proposal finalized and put out for public</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">comments too) by the time the combined transition proposal is out for public</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">comment .. Should such parts be changed to reflect the status of the</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">accountability proposal at the time of the public comment period?</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Looking forward to receiving your input/feedback/suggestions/comments ..</pre>
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                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Kind Regards</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">--Manal</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">-----Original Message-----</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">From: Internal-cg [<a moz-do-not-send="true" rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org" target="_blank" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of Lynn</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">St.Amour</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Sent: Thursday, July 23, 2015 6:54 PM</pre>
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                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Again, thanks much Manal,</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">To-date, I reviewed this through the ICG report section (only), and made</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">some edits to try and convey why the report was combined in this way.� I</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">would appreciate it if folks could review it carefully, as I believe it is a</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">critical point (and sensitive).� And, some of it may be better suited to the</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Exec. Summary.� </pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Joe, I believe you had volunteered to send some draft text re the Exec.</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">summary.� If this is correct, can I do anything to help?� If I have it</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">wrong, I will look up the minutes (can't do that just now though,</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">unfortunately).</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">And, could those individuals who have been participating in the CWG -</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Stewardship and the CCWG efforts, please review the appropriate sections to</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">ensure they reflect the latest positions?</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';"> �</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Finally, we should aim to have� all comments on this and the public web-site</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">no later than this Friday, so that we can review the "very near final"</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">drafts of this on Monday, in order to meet our public comment period</pre>
                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">timetable of July 31st.</pre>
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                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Many thanks,</pre>
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                              <pre style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 10pt; font-family: 'Courier New';">Lynn</pre>
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