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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body bgcolor=white lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Hi Joe and All,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Both attachments from Joe are available for review in this Dropbox folder (which also contains all the latest versions of everything you need to review for the upcoming public comment period).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Dropbox folder link: <a href="http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2">http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Please let me know if you have any questions.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Jennifer<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></a></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext'> joseph alhadeff [mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com] <br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, July 24, 2015 9:30 AM<br><b>To:</b> Jennifer Chung <jen@icgsec.asia>; 'Manal Ismail' <manal@tra.gov.eg>; 'Lynn St.Amour' <lynn@lstamour.org>; internal-cg@ianacg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'>Colleagues:<br><br>I attach a proposed executive summary. I have drafted a slightly longer stand alone version of the summary sourced from the document. It summarizes process and conclusions. We may wish to add a closing section as it seems to end abruptly?<br><br>Happy for any thoughts.<br><br>Jennifer, I'm running out to a meeting, could you post the draft executive summary to drop box?<br><br>I also attach a first and incomplete draft of what had been a more summarized version, but think that the short version may be best suited to public material or a cover note. I attach it to see if any language could be useful elsewhere...<br><br>Joe<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>On 7/23/2015 11:55 PM, Jennifer Chung wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><pre>Hi All,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Attached and linked is v5-MI-LSA-PW-JC. Dropbox link:<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="http://icgsec.asia/1JiezqA">http://icgsec.asia/1JiezqA</a> . This includes Paul's latest edits as well as<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>the requests from Manal below:<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>"maybe secretariat could kindly assist in inserting the suggested<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>link(s)/footnote(s) (criteria against which the ICG assessed the proposals,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>individually and collectively) and graph (showing the % of IANA transactions<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>(for 2014) per area) .."<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Two points relating to Manal/Lynn's request:<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>1. I have linked to the published ICG proposal finalization process<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/iana-transition-assembly-finaliz">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/iana-transition-assembly-finaliz</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre>ation-24dec14-en.pdf. We have not published the individual assessment word<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>template (<a href="http://icgsec.asia/1el3lEA">http://icgsec.asia/1el3lEA</a>) on the ICG web site - I can do so if<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>we want to link to this in the ICG report.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>2. The data for the chart inserted was taken from pg. 53 of the IANA<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>presentation linked here:<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="https://singapore52.icann.org/en/schedule/wed-iana/presentation-iana-departm">https://singapore52.icann.org/en/schedule/wed-iana/presentation-iana-departm</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre>ent-11feb15-en.pdf. Lynn/Manal/all, please let me know if this is that is<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>envisaged.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Lastly please note that the paragraph numbering is not correct in this file.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Once all the edits for the ICG report are in, the Secretariat will merge the<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>ICG report back into the correctly numbered v5.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>As always, the latest versions of all the public comment related documents<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>for your review is in this Dropbox folder: <a href="http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2">http://icgsec.asia/1OfxHW2</a> <o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Please let me know if you have any questions.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Jennifer<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>-----Original Message-----<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>From: Internal-cg [<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of Manal<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Ismail<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Sent: Thursday, July 23, 2015 9:07 PM<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>To: Lynn St.Amour <a href="mailto:lynn@lstamour.org"><lynn@lstamour.org></a>; <a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Many thanks Lynn for the suggested edits and for your comments ..<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Following your email, I would also urge colleagues to review and provide<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>feedback by Friday in order to meet our public comment period dates .. <o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Meanwhile, for the sake of time, maybe the secretariat could kindly assist<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>in inserting the suggested link(s)/footnote(s) (criteria against which the<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>ICG assessed the proposals, individually and collectively) and graph<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>(showing the % of IANA transactions (for 2014) per area) ..<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>I also believe we need to conclude on the order of the proposals .. Although<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>it is not a substantial change it would still require a thorough review and<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>several edits throughout the document (ICG report, sections' headers, ...)<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>..<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>I had a few questions throughout the report and hope colleagues would review<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>and provide further guidance ..<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Finally, some parts of the text (highlighted in blue to my best) reflect the<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>current status of the accountability proposal (ongoing discussions) which<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>won't be the case (accountability proposal finalized and put out for public<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>comments too) by the time the combined transition proposal is out for public<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>comment .. Should such parts be changed to reflect the status of the<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>accountability proposal at the time of the public comment period?<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Looking forward to receiving your input/feedback/suggestions/comments ..<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>--Manal<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>-----Original Message-----<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>From: Internal-cg [<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@ianacg.org</a>] On Behalf Of Lynn<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>St.Amour<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Sent: Thursday, July 23, 2015 6:54 PM<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>To: <a href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Latest version of the combined proposal - v5<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Again, thanks much Manal,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>To-date, I reviewed this through the ICG report section (only), and made<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>some edits to try and convey why the report was combined in this way. I<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>would appreciate it if folks could review it carefully, as I believe it is a<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>critical point (and sensitive). And, some of it may be better suited to the<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Exec. Summary. <o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Joe, I believe you had volunteered to send some draft text re the Exec.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>summary. If this is correct, can I do anything to help? If I have it<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>wrong, I will look up the minutes (can't do that just now though,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>unfortunately).<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>And, could those individuals who have been participating in the CWG -<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Stewardship and the CCWG efforts, please review the appropriate sections to<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>ensure they reflect the latest positions?<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Finally, we should aim to have all comments on this and the public web-site<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>no later than this Friday, so that we can review the "very near final"<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>drafts of this on Monday, in order to meet our public comment period<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>timetable of July 31st.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Many thanks,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Lynn<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Internal-cg mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><p class=MsoNormal><br><br><br><o:p></o:p></p><pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Internal-cg mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org">Internal-cg@mm.ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org">http://mm.ianacg.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg_ianacg.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre></blockquote><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>