<div dir="ltr"><div>Alissa</div><div>Tks for edits and revision.</div><div>Will revert to you soon</div><div>Kavouss</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-07-12 7:54 GMT+02:00 Alissa Cooper <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" target="_blank">alissa@cooperw.in</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">All,<br>
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I\u2019ve updated the public comment web page material [1] based on our discussions at the F2F and during our last call. I also did some editorial work on it. The Background and Summary sections are derived directly from the ICG report in the combined proposal.<br>
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Please review and provide your feedback. We will need to finalize this by July 29 assuming we finish the proposal assessment this week.<br>
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I\u2019m hoping that Lynn will be able to shepherd the process of incorporating feedback and filling in the remaining placeholders since I will be mostly tied up with IETF matters next week.<br>
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Secretariat: If you could gather the links that should go in the final section, that would be great.<br>
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Thanks,<br>
Alissa<br>
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[1] <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl=0" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">https://www.dropbox.com/s/bx3hjc18zdjqxox/public-comment-web-page-v2.docx?dl=0</a><br>
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