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    A couple of minor points related to this version:<br>
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    I think the use of "Larry" in the last paragraph is too informal use
    the full name or Mr. Strikling. Also in the last sentence, why
    should we limit soliciting their thoughts only till June? - why not
    in the course of the proposal development process?...<br>
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    Other than that fine.<br>
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    Joe<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/28/2015 2:21 AM, WUKnoben wrote:<br>
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          <div><font color="#000000">Thanks Alissa,</font></div>
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            #000000">see my suggestion in red.<br>
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            Best regards<br>
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            Wolf-Ulrich<br>
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                <div style="font-color: black"><b>From:</b> <a
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                    href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</a> </div>
                <div><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, May 28, 2015 12:58 AM</div>
                <div><b>To:</b> <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    title="internal-cg@ianacg.org"
                    href="mailto:internal-cg@ianacg.org">internal-cg@ianacg.org</a>
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                <div><b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] Implementation email
                  for ICANN</div>
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            <div>Here is a proposed email to ICANN/Steve Crocker based
              on our discussion during call #17. Please provide your
              feedback.</div>
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            <div>---</div>
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            <div>Dear Steve,</div>
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            <div>The ICG chairs recently received a letter from Larry
              Strickling [1] that included the following text:</div>
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            <div>"Accordingly, to assist us in our planning for the
              fall, I ask that the community provide us with an update
              on the status of the transition planning and the
              associated timeframes, including the communitys views as
              to how long it will take to finalize the transition plan
              and implement it after it is approved. We request that you
              and the three primary customer working groups provide us
              with your views before the end of June, which will give
              you the opportunity to discuss these issues with the
              multistakeholder community at the June ICANN meeting in
              Argentina. In providing this feedback, please keep in mind
              that the United States Government will need sufficient
              time to evaluate the proposal and that all work items
              identified either by the ICG and the CCWG-Accountability
              as prerequisites for the transition will need to be
              implemented prior to the ending of the contract.</div>
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            <div>We understand that the CCWG chairs received a similar
              letter.</div>
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            <div><font color="#ff0000"><strike>We</strike></font> <font
                color="#ff0000">The ICG </font>ha<font color="#ff0000">s</font><font
                color="#ff0000"><strike>ve</strike></font> inquired with
              the operational communities about how much time the
              communities believe they will need to complete proposal
              development and implement the aspects of the transition
              proposal that the communities have identified as needing
              to be completed prior to the expiry of the NTIA contract
              (e.g., creation of new contracts, agreements, or entities)
              [2][3][4]. We expect ICANN to provide input within those
              communities as appropriate as they formulate their
              responses to us, but if there are time frames associated
              with internal ICANN processes or any other ICANN-specific
              implementation information that <font color="#ff0000"><strike>you</strike></font><font
                color="#ff0000">the ICANN board </font>think<font
                color="#ff0000">s</font> we should know in formulating
              our response to Larry, we would appreciate if you could
              share that with us directly by June 9 at 23:59 UTC. If you
              have further thoughts to communicate to us later in June,
              that would be welcome as well.</div>
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            <div>Thanks,</div>
            <div>Alissa, Patrik, and Mohamed</div>
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            <div>[1] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/correspondence/Letter-to-ICG-May-6.pdf">http://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/correspondence/Letter-to-ICG-May-6.pdf</a></div>
            <div>[2] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ianaplan/current/msg01847.html">http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ianaplan/current/msg01847.html</a></div>
            <div>[3] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                href="https://www.nro.net/pipermail/ianaxfer/2015-May/000563.html">https://www.nro.net/pipermail/ianaxfer/2015-May/000563.html</a></div>
            <div>[4] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/cwg-stewardship/2015-May/003402.html">http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/cwg-stewardship/2015-May/003402.html</a></div>
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