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A couple of minor points related to this version:<br>
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I think the use of "Larry" in the last paragraph is too informal use
the full name or Mr. Strikling. Also in the last sentence, why
should we limit soliciting their thoughts only till June? - why not
in the course of the proposal development process?...<br>
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Other than that fine.<br>
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Joe<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/28/2015 2:21 AM, WUKnoben wrote:<br>
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<div><font color="#000000">Thanks Alissa,</font></div>
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<div style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR:
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Best regards<br>
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Wolf-Ulrich<br>
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<div style="font-color: black"><b>From:</b> <a
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href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</a> </div>
<div><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, May 28, 2015 12:58 AM</div>
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title="internal-cg@ianacg.org"
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<div><b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] Implementation email
for ICANN</div>
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<div>Here is a proposed email to ICANN/Steve Crocker based
on our discussion during call #17. Please provide your
feedback.</div>
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<div>Dear Steve,</div>
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<div>The ICG chairs recently received a letter from Larry
Strickling [1] that included the following text:</div>
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<div>"Accordingly, to assist us in our planning for the
fall, I ask that the community provide us with an update
on the status of the transition planning and the
associated timeframes, including the communitys views as
to how long it will take to finalize the transition plan
and implement it after it is approved. We request that you
and the three primary customer working groups provide us
with your views before the end of June, which will give
you the opportunity to discuss these issues with the
multistakeholder community at the June ICANN meeting in
Argentina. In providing this feedback, please keep in mind
that the United States Government will need sufficient
time to evaluate the proposal and that all work items
identified either by the ICG and the CCWG-Accountability
as prerequisites for the transition will need to be
implemented prior to the ending of the contract.</div>
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<div>We understand that the CCWG chairs received a similar
letter.</div>
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<div><font color="#ff0000"><strike>We</strike></font> <font
color="#ff0000">The ICG </font>ha<font color="#ff0000">s</font><font
color="#ff0000"><strike>ve</strike></font> inquired with
the operational communities about how much time the
communities believe they will need to complete proposal
development and implement the aspects of the transition
proposal that the communities have identified as needing
to be completed prior to the expiry of the NTIA contract
(e.g., creation of new contracts, agreements, or entities)
[2][3][4]. We expect ICANN to provide input within those
communities as appropriate as they formulate their
responses to us, but if there are time frames associated
with internal ICANN processes or any other ICANN-specific
implementation information that <font color="#ff0000"><strike>you</strike></font><font
color="#ff0000">the ICANN board </font>think<font
color="#ff0000">s</font> we should know in formulating
our response to Larry, we would appreciate if you could
share that with us directly by June 9 at 23:59 UTC. If you
have further thoughts to communicate to us later in June,
that would be welcome as well.</div>
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<div>Thanks,</div>
<div>Alissa, Patrik, and Mohamed</div>
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<div>[1] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/correspondence/Letter-to-ICG-May-6.pdf">http://www.ianacg.org/icg-files/correspondence/Letter-to-ICG-May-6.pdf</a></div>
<div>[2] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ianaplan/current/msg01847.html">http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ianaplan/current/msg01847.html</a></div>
<div>[3] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://www.nro.net/pipermail/ianaxfer/2015-May/000563.html">https://www.nro.net/pipermail/ianaxfer/2015-May/000563.html</a></div>
<div>[4] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/cwg-stewardship/2015-May/003402.html">http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/cwg-stewardship/2015-May/003402.html</a></div>
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